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Art by Casarah Nance.

Kiss of Death

Yesterday, I soared with the wind
Today, death and I dance entwined in a slow waltz
Somber mood as bright lights shine above
Wagner in the background of semi-consciousness

Looking up at tubes, needles, wires and the reaper
Faces staring down, heads shaking in doubtful sadness
Onwards we roll, battle of the bacterium 
Ensuring, I, wake only in hazy delirium

I reach out into emptiness
Grasping for the significance of it all
Falling into an existential black hole
Loveless, alone, is this to be my last stroll

Illusions and dreams creeping back into my soul
Hearing songbirds, will life have another go?
The winds roar once more inside my head
I stand up, with a smile, I am alive! Not dead!

Life has infected me with a fresh kiss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hamilton Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 4:22 PM
Sooo Arthur, seems like finally it happened, I joked with you in my last comment that you seem to die a lot in your poetry, I didn't know this was real until I read the comments. Glad you're on the road to recovery, maybe your perspective will change after dancing with death, I know mine sure did!
Duet Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 10:08 PM
Well thank goodness! So glad you are better, Arthur. And, congrats on this most appropo poem and making POTW.
Downing  Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 6:03 AM
I love the ending! Congrats Arthur on your POTW :)
William Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 9:15 PM
Congratulations
Roper Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 2:33 PM
Congratulations my dear, on POTD.. but more that you are still here with us... lots of love sweet friend
Wanter Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 11:44 AM
You are always unique and thought provoking. Congratulations!
Warrior Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Congrats!!! on POTW my friend...hope you're doing OK Arthur...god bless...^WW^
Daniel Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 5:58 AM
Great writing, Arthur, I wish you well:) congratulations on POTW:)
White Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 2:33 PM
Owww. I only now find out you PotW, so happy :) And owww, how familiar that poem sounds and reads. You made it :)
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 12:22 PM
MANY congrats on POTW Arthur I am so glad you are recovered and back posting on soup:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 11:37 AM
Congrats on POTW...a fresh kiss
Roper Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 8:06 PM
Oh my, Arthur, this sounds like you were really sick .... Don't ever get to that point, please <3 love you
Vaso Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:36 AM
Yes, was bad for awhile, but much better now!
Nance Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 6:45 PM
A great write very fitting for my doodle. Tempting darkness ink drips from the lifeforce of the muse.
Vaso Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:36 AM
Thanks Cas, and I loved your doodle!
Roberts Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 5:51 PM
now what is that saying.....something about only the good etc etc.... Haha glad your not so good and you are still with us.....Seren
Vaso Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:35 AM
LOL, if thats true I am living forever Seren!!!!
Sands Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Excellent, well written poem with a powerful ending :)
Vaso Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Thank you Heidi, much appreciated.
Muideen Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 7:32 AM
What a pleasant ending. I enjoyed reading this gem.
Vaso Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Very kind of you Afolabi, thanks!
Wolf Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 3:36 AM
Welcome back to the dream, Great Bear!
Vaso Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:34 AM
Thank you Mr Wolfe!
Allison Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 2:41 AM
The kiss of death - what an apt title Arthur and I'm so glad you are back with us ... some are not so lucky to recover from such an ordeal. I found the third stanza so sad and it makes me thankful i have my hubby son and mum and friends around me... of course if i was ill you know who in my family would have pulled the plug lol :-) so glad you are here with us again:-) hugs jan x the picture is perfect... it should be titled 'here lies Art':-)
Vaso Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:34 AM
Still slowly recovering, hopefully back to 100% soon!
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 1:02 AM
- You got a second chance, Arthur :) - A great poem with death in the eye hook - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:33 AM
Thanks Sunshine! More like a 9th chance, I think I am a cat!! LOL
Smith Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 12:16 AM
May that infection disapate very slowly Arthur and provide our community its just reward.
Vaso Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:33 AM
Thanks Charlie!
Smith Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 10:17 PM
When death stares us in the face life seems that much sweeter. Welcome back and I'm happy you are recovering nicely.
Vaso Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Tim, and yes, it does give a new perspective!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 9:22 PM
Beautiful last line! An emotional write!
Vaso Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:31 AM
Thank you Kim!
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