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your silken skin gleams opaline
bathed in Luna's soft wash of cornflower - like a
porcelain Madonna by Michelangelo
conjured to life by the magic
of moonlight

your eyes open just long enough to
affix mine, and affirm I'm in a mode of veneration
(you're casting the line)
 
the soft details of your
visage above me are close enough to occupy my
entire gaze, but far enough that
I can interpret your every expression
and you're well aware of it
(setting the hook)
 
as your gentle sway attends the
cadence of my core, you teasingly open your eyes
just far enough to let me know
they're rolled back in an aspect of rapture
and by seductive design, you nip
your lower lip with your teeth and hold it there
(reeling me in - carnal captive)
 
the beating catches in
my chest and takes my breath with it
heaving up and arching you with
it's wake, as you
take advantage of my movement

my breath finally returns in a
guttural sigh, and as if trading an erotic dialogue
your supple chili pepper lips curve
into a gentle smile, born of the knowledge
that I'm now completely at
your mercy
 
the spice in your smile freezes my
gaze to your mouth, and my
mind's eye conjures up fresh, plump raspberries and
soft whipped cream
making me thirst for the nectar-sweet
taste of what's inside
 
as if my thoughts were
your own, your smile relaxes and parts
just enough to tempt me with
the fleshy fruit of your tongue, and I reach up
with my right hand to the
back of your head
(my left hand at its own quarry)
 
weaving my fingertips through
your hair, I pull your head downward as you relax
until your face is just close enough to
be out of reach of mine
and you turn it quickly to the side so it's
completely bathed in moonlight
for you know all too well
how that slays me
(the moon painting your skin)
 
eyes still closed
the sexy smirk returns to your face
with the confirmation
(via my sighs)
that your seductive game is having
its desired affect
 
repeating the process
you turn your face back toward me and play
peek-a-boo with your tongue
opening your smile just enough to
torment me with it's moist gleam, bouncing playfully
just inside your mouth
as if waiting for it's first taste of
ice cream
 
you relax your neck and I tug
your head gently but firmly down again, toward mine
but as before, you turn your face
at the last moment
smile sensuously, and taunt me with
your parted lips - sugary tongue making more of
an appearance this time
 
after tempting me
with this ritual, 'juste assez'
you stop one more time
just short of my face, and THIS time it's
MY mouth that stays closed ...
so you softly brush my lips with the tip of your tongue
and wait, as I continue my feigned role
as the 'reluctant lover'
turning the tables of this tottering tease
(if only in my mind)
 
but we both know
it's all for show, that you're in complete
control of the game - holding all
the carnal cards
you, my Queen of Hearts
 
very slowly and deliberately
your eyes finally open and hook with mine
the reflected light of the
moon just enough to sparkle life into
that gaze that RUINS me, sullen
and vulnerable and
YOURS
 
yours ...
to the depths of my bare soul
where I can't run or hide
or escape the grasp of your heart on my very being
where love's visceral truth cries out for
it's own knowledge
where it longs to be consumed by it's
own passionate hatred for
anything that
isn't US
 
you giggle, and like THAT my
breath is gone again
and this time it keeps catching in my gut
as I gasp again-and-again
for it's return
but that LQQK holds me boundless
(as boundless as my body
holds yours)

I am drifting, swirling, falling ... INTO you

our spirits are now
melding so completely that
I almost feel ...

ALONE

we are so much of
one element that "we" feels like "I" - and it
terrifies me ...
how can I be looking into your
eyes, and at the same time feel so completely
taken by you, that I AM you ...
and you I?

I have to close my
eyes for an instant - just long
enough to remember where I am and WHO I am
and when I open them again yours
are closed, (thank heaven)
and my breath finally returns in a massive
surge of adrenaline
my dopamine-filled blood rushing and
coursing through my body
like music in my marrow, my skin
awakening to your tender
touch
 
I look up at you
and that coy, sexy, knowing smile is
still warming your face
(my reward, close)
 
my hand is still on
the back of your head, and I relax my
grip just enough to let your
hair fall ...
you shake it gently
so it now hangs child-like about your face
framing it like a fallen
angel's halo
 
very delicately, I pull your face down
toward mine one last time
(still smiling - helpless before you)
and just before your nose touches mine
you twist your head slightly
to match me, and your hair falls
thickly between our
mouths ...
 
at last
I am rewarded for my patience
at last
you reel in your helpless catch

having driven me to the
very brink, you finally take pity on me
and as your mouth opens
I drink you in -
like a man who has
crossed the desert without
water

spicy smile, raspberry lips
creamy tongue, angel hair, hint of briny-sweet
from your glistening skin -
all are a honey tangle in our mouths
stirred by a love, passion and
closeness unimaginable
 
I surrender ...
closing my eyes I give in to it ALL
letting you gather me
plunging - swimming up the current to your source
willing to do all you wish or bid of me
I am home, I am complete
I am fulfilled and nourished and quenched
I am yours, absolute
the fool for your

KISS.







~ 1st Place ~  in the "''K'' Contest, New Or Old" Poetry Contest, Constance La France, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "Your Best Free Verse Love Poem Poetry Contest", John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "Strand Choice 2, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 10th Place ~  in the "Help Me Fall In Love" Poetry Contest, Mystic Rose, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 1/20/2021 10:35:00 AM
Sweet surrender so beautifully expressed through a "spicy smile" and "raspberry lips." Your talent and mastery of words and phrases is displayed as you spin images and feeling through your verses. Congrats and kudos Greg! Blessings.
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Date: 9/8/2018 5:35:00 PM
Oh my! I am speechless. Completely breathless. Please know that saying more- well, would be saying too much. I will say this- congratulations on this win. Well deserved. Deep, deep sigh. ~ Brandy
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/8/2018 8:07:00 PM
Oh, you are so sweet, Brandy, and I thank you so much! I know this is a bit of a time investment for the reader, and that makes comments all the more meaningful to me, that folks take the time. Blessings, Dear friend! :-) <3
Date: 9/14/2017 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations, Greg on your well deserved win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/3/2018 10:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal! :-)
Date: 3/5/2017 6:42:00 AM
Absolutely thrilling. What a beautiful piece....how fulfilling. Thank you for guiding me here. You have placed this two becoming one where it belongs...paradise. I have responded to your latest comment on my poem. :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/5/2017 7:20:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Eileen - that means a lot! It's amazing to me that a moment in our lives such as this can take our minds so many places in just a short time, but really, that's what our minds are doing all the time. This was a moment of less than a minute in reality, but yet when remembered, it took me many places in my thoughts. I almost never let anyone see this as it was a bit more intimate than I'd been before, but I'm glad I did, as it has helped me grow with my writing, and has been enjoyed by others. Thank you again for your kindness and understanding - I am thankful for your friendship. :-)
Date: 2/26/2017 7:08:00 AM
Simply beautiful Greg, you build desire into a crescendo and then release. Congrats on your #1.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/26/2017 4:46:00 PM
Thank you so very kindly, Phil, that means a great deal coming from a talented writer like you ... I know this is a long one and probably pushing the patience boundaries lol, but I enjoyed pulling this memory up from the depths. Blessings, my friend!
Date: 2/24/2017 8:40:00 PM
Lovely, Greg! Congrats!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/24/2017 9:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim - very much appreciated!
Date: 2/24/2017 8:35:00 PM
Well Greg, I say...very well done, next time I think I will limit contest to 40 lines, but even so I couldn't stop reading this one! Congratulations on solo #1.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/24/2017 9:45:00 PM
Oh my gosh - just saw this and it made my day! Thank you so much, John, for the kind words and the win ... it means more than you know. My 90-year-old mom is very sick right now, and I needed a little sunshine ... I am humbled and honored at the same time, and very pleased that you found my poem worthwhile of such recognition. Many thanks and blessings to you! :)
Date: 1/5/2017 4:52:00 AM
Left handed then are you? Can I be cynical? Is she the very one that breaks your heart later on?
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 1/5/2017 1:09:00 PM
Too right.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/5/2017 5:19:00 AM
She is ONE of those who have broken my heart ... I wish it had been limited to just one, but then heartbreak DOES supply us with such inspiration, eh? ;-)
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