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King Doberman

I am king Doberman of my home
I stand guard when I am all alone
I love my master, he’s the man
But I am top dog, king of my land
He feeds me kibble and takes me out
He says do my business, often shouts

I don’t know why he leaves every day
but I get a bone when he’s been away
I sometimes chew his shoes and ties
They smell like him, I can fantasize
I hear my master, he’s at the door
I better look innocent and lay on the floor

At last he’s home again to stay
I've had a very long, boring day
I run and jump and let out a squall
As I stop and stare at my huge yellow ball
I whine and pace, until I get my way
I know my master will give in and play



8/4/18 for Doberman Pinscher contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh
  
Based on link:Link A: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cB9pVJ3mYcE

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Susan Ashley Date: 6/22/2019 8:19:00 PM Oh, this is truly an adorable and exuberant personification, Tania. You captured king Doberman's essence beautifully. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 6/23/2019 5:28:00 AM Thank you Susan!

Edward Ibeh Date: 6/17/2019 5:46:00 AM Back again to congratulate you on yet another win with this amazing write, Tania!:-) Quite a fun revisit! Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 6/17/2019 5:47:00 AM Thank you Edward, I did enjoy writing this one! :)

Susan Gentry Date: 8/18/2018 11:24:00 PM Oh this one is not spoiled at all lol. Congratulations on your win. Great rhymes and rhythm. Well done! Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 8/19/2018 7:15:00 AM thank you!

Francesca Pappadogiannis Date: 8/18/2018 3:37:00 AM This is so true of a Doberman. Well captured. Congratulations on your win Tania :) Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 8/18/2018 4:32:00 AM thank you

Jan Allison Date: 8/17/2018 6:29:00 PM really cute Tania! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 8/17/2018 8:58:00 PM thank you Jan!

Janice Canerdy Date: 8/17/2018 5:55:00 PM LOVE this, Tania! CONGRATS. Janice Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 8/17/2018 6:07:00 PM thank you!

Edward Ibeh Date: 8/17/2018 5:09:00 PM Thank you so much for participating in my contest, Tania!:-) Loved this personification write! Congrats on your well-deserved win! Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 8/17/2018 5:30:00 PM thank you!

Line Gauthier Date: 8/17/2018 4:12:00 PM A fun personification, Tania. Well done. Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 8/17/2018 5:30:00 PM thank you!

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/8/2018 8:31:00 AM This is excellent, Tania, great personification and rhyme:) Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 8/8/2018 11:23:00 AM thank you!

Reason A. Poteet Date: 8/6/2018 4:01:00 PM Tania, this is excellent imagery. Dogs have such personalities and you have captured this one well. Best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 8/6/2018 4:17:00 PM thank you!