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King Doberman

I am king Doberman of my home I stand guard when I am all alone I love my master, he’s the man But I am top dog, king of my land He feeds me kibble and takes me out He says do my business, often shouts I don’t know why he leaves every day but I get a bone when he’s been away I sometimes chew his shoes and ties They smell like him, I can fantasize I hear my master, he’s at the door I better look innocent and lay on the floor At last he’s home again to stay I've had a very long, boring day I run and jump and let out a squall As I stop and stare at my huge yellow ball I whine and pace, until I get my way I know my master will give in and play 8/4/18 for Doberman Pinscher contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh Based on link:Link A: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cB9pVJ3mYcE

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Date: 6/22/2019 8:19:00 PM
Oh, this is truly an adorable and exuberant personification, Tania. You captured king Doberman's essence beautifully. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/23/2019 5:28:00 AM
Thank you Susan!
Date: 6/17/2019 5:46:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you on yet another win with this amazing write, Tania!:-) Quite a fun revisit!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/17/2019 5:47:00 AM
Thank you Edward, I did enjoy writing this one! :)
Date: 8/18/2018 11:24:00 PM
Oh this one is not spoiled at all lol. Congratulations on your win. Great rhymes and rhythm. Well done!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/19/2018 7:15:00 AM
thank you!
Date: 8/18/2018 3:37:00 AM
This is so true of a Doberman. Well captured. Congratulations on your win Tania :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/18/2018 4:32:00 AM
thank you
Date: 8/17/2018 6:29:00 PM
really cute Tania! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/17/2018 8:58:00 PM
thank you Jan!
Date: 8/17/2018 5:55:00 PM
LOVE this, Tania! CONGRATS. Janice
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/17/2018 6:07:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 8/17/2018 5:09:00 PM
Thank you so much for participating in my contest, Tania!:-) Loved this personification write! Congrats on your well-deserved win!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/17/2018 5:30:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 8/17/2018 4:12:00 PM
A fun personification, Tania. Well done.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/17/2018 5:30:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 8/8/2018 8:31:00 AM
This is excellent, Tania, great personification and rhyme:)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/8/2018 11:23:00 AM
thank you!
Date: 8/6/2018 4:01:00 PM
Tania, this is excellent imagery. Dogs have such personalities and you have captured this one well. Best of luck in the contest.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/6/2018 4:17:00 PM
thank you!

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