King and She

The king announced he might abdicate, but first his enemies he would castigate. He thought slowly and did concentrate before he sought them to intimidate. His comely wife he did adulate. He did not wish to deprecate her reputation so he did hesitate, himself or her, to incriminate. She had no thought to duplicate, no desire at all to replicate and he was willing to extricate himself from the desire to procreate. His enemies ready to infiltrate, he sought the wisdom to meditate on how he might obdurate and keep his kingdom inviolate.
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Tor Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 11:49 AM
Thoughtful read Linda. So much effort you made to write this one I applaud your effort.God bless you Dear...
Fowler Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Thank you dear Michael. My first attempt. I wrote a better one (I think) after having submitted this one. Practice makes perfect :) smiles, Linda
Wolf Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 9:00 PM
After reading this one, I can report that it, my vision did obfuscate! ~ Peter Primate
Fowler Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 6:08 AM
I made my eyes cross just writing it Peter ;) laf
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October 5, 2022 at 12:18 PM
I think I ate the words up lol, beautiful display of talent here, dear Linda, winning wishes on wingly doves and star tails, perhaps even the Holy Grail :)
Fowler Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 2:21 PM
Thank you dear friend Vie. If only...;) Linda
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October 4, 2022 at 9:39 PM
Exquisite Monorhyme, Linda. Should do well in the contest! Your rhyming was perfect and didn't get in the way of the story within the poem. Bill
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October 5, 2022 at 5:30 AM
Good morning Bill. I appreciate your encouraging comments. :) Linda
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October 4, 2022 at 4:23 PM
Wonderful writing Linda! Monorhyme is tricky at best. You did a wonderful job integrating rhyme, meter and meaning. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings and a hug.
Fowler Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 6:52 PM
Hi Sam. My first effort...I can only get better with practice, right? Many thanks for the supportive comments :) blessings and hugs, Linda
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October 4, 2022 at 11:51 AM
Not an easy poem to write using such monorhyme. Great poetry.
Fowler Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 2:30 PM
Thanks friend Victor. hugs, Linda
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