King

He is the King of my world He makes everything fit in their mould when things are in disarray I know I am part of the potter’s clay when I weep and feel empty He turns around and show me love aplenty I can walk a tight rope fail the King at times, but He gives me scope exoneration a honor a blessing from up yonder He is my King the reason why my heart sings… 6th place YAY FOR "K" Sponsored by: NIKKO PALMARIO

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/20/2010 8:51:00 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Yah for "K"!". Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 10/20/2010 6:47:00 AM

Many congratulations Wilma on your win in Nikko's contest with this fine poetry >> James :)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/19/2010 9:39:00 PM

Lovely one Wilma. Many congratulations for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2010 8:10:00 PM

AWEsome, Wilma. And congrats on your fine win. LUv, Andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/19/2010 3:14:00 PM

Great K you wrote about. Congratulations Wilma on your win. Love, Joyce

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/19/2010 10:54:00 AM

beautiful poem , many congrats on your win in the contest

John Freeman

Date: 10/19/2010 9:51:00 AM

Wilma, "Congratulations" a poem well worthy of a place in the top ten. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/19/2010 7:59:00 AM

Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Wilma! I love this poem and am so pleased to see you in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/19/2010 7:37:00 AM

what a deeply inspiring poem this is that celebrates your faith, Wilma-- a wonderful poem that reminded me as well of how things will be all right-- I just have to keep trusting in God-- super congrats on your win-- way to go with this :) hugs to you :) nikko :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/19/2010 7:13:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/19/2010 6:07:00 AM

Congrats dear Wilma on your big win in Nikko's K contest with this excellent entry on KING ... a magnificent piece luv.. enjoy a sweet victory today my friend with luv..

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/1/2010 3:04:00 PM

Hey Wilma! Hoop you are having a great time which is mirrored in this poetry!....Take care and all the best!...Gert:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2010 4:47:00 PM

This kind of writing makes me say you are in love. But you could be l like me and making lots of stuff up? haha. LUv, Andrea

David Smalling

Date: 9/28/2010 6:28:00 PM

Voiceless, I join you in your song, for in your melody I am made strong ... wonderful song of faith, thanks for being my friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2010 5:01:00 PM

ARe you in love, Wilma. It sure sounds like it a LOT lately!! Very nice. LUv, Andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/28/2010 4:27:00 PM

Souds as though you have your world pretty well organzied. Nice poetry. Thanks for reading mine. Love, Joyce

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 9/28/2010 10:36:00 AM

how sweet enjoy your king and be his queen forever thanks for all your kind comments faleshia

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/28/2010 8:17:00 AM

Excellent entry for the "K" word challenge, Wilma. Indeed, your King is forgiving, loving and compassionate. A spiritually uplifting verse, my friend, and I wish you well in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2010 6:31:00 AM

Great message of your faith in God our Father..Keep the faith pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem about "Faithfulness"...If you look closely at the last stanza, you might notice something that would change your whole interpertation of the write..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/28/2010 6:01:00 AM

He the King and God as one always forgive and undersand... well written my partner in crime...Love Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/28/2010 6:00:00 AM

Very fine write on faith, Wilma