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the soul can be kind and imperfect yet never perfect and unkind

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Date: 12/8/2023 3:16:00 PM
So true! :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/8/2023 4:12:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 12/7/2023 7:56:00 PM
True enough... perhaps also the soul can be 'kind of' imperfect... ~ Now I lay me down to sleep, and pray the Lord my soul to patch all those glitches tonight...
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/8/2023 5:01:00 AM
I always appreciate your witty comments and take on my poetry. Thanks for consistently reading my poems. Grateful for you. Have a pleasant day, Sara
Date: 12/7/2023 6:18:00 PM
Though-provoking poetry at its best, my sweet friend. Thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts with us through your equally beautiful poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings forever, my dear wife and poet. Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/8/2023 5:00:00 AM
thank you my hubby, poet, and bard extraordinair, for reading my poems and for encouraging me. Grateful for you, hugs, me
Date: 12/7/2023 6:08:00 PM
Beautiful intensity, Sara. A genuine quality that natures you, my friend. Aloha from not too far from Pearl Harbor Dec. 7th day, William
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/8/2023 4:59:00 AM
thank you for stopping by, William. I appreciate your thoughtful comments and 'Aloha' greetings. Have a splendid Friday, Sara
Date: 12/7/2023 5:21:00 PM
A profound message my friend. Have a glorious evening.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/7/2023 5:41:00 PM
thank you for stopping by, Jerry, and for your kind words. Enjoy your Thursday evening, Sara
Date: 12/7/2023 2:50:00 PM
Yes, the last line could never be, since the assumption is that perfection means all the qualities of the Spirit; love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, self control, goodness, faith, mildness and more. Very nice Sara
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/7/2023 4:20:00 PM
thanks for stopping by, Tom, and for sharing your thoughts. Have a splendid evening, Sara

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