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Kincaids Cross On Mountain

The ocean on the rocks cannot reach... Rays from the cliffs beseech... A vine coiled ‘round a stake... The true vine — make no mistake! Before my eyes reach the sea, I only see the God who watches me. The sky’s burgeoning with my praise. Grave shadows flee my knees. Ground beneath is hard and gentle — I lean into the wrath of God and his stand-in-the-gap son. The word of God is on my tongue... The path I walked was narrow... The life I lead, a sparrow or is it a dove — the coo of love. Those dark seas tremble... They cannot pluck me from my place! O how beautiful is grace… 1/5/2021 Brian Strand’s Ekphrasis contest John 15:1 NIV (Jesus says) “I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener.

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Date: 1/11/2021 10:50:00 PM
Wow such a great write Kim and congratualtions my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/12/2021 5:45:00 AM
Thank you, Ann!
Date: 1/10/2021 7:16:00 AM
Wonderful write Kim, Congrats on your win..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2021 9:33:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 1/8/2021 5:59:00 PM
"They cannot pluck me from my place! O how "beautiful is grace…" What a steadfast faith! Congratulations sister Kim on your 1st place win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2021 9:33:00 AM
Thank you, JCB! Bless you!
Date: 1/6/2021 7:27:00 AM
This one was penned in heaven first; you must have dreamed it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/6/2021 8:47:00 AM
You are so sweet!
Date: 1/6/2021 4:29:00 AM
Verses that help one ascend the heavens dearest, Kim! Hugs xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/6/2021 4:59:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios!
Date: 1/5/2021 10:02:00 AM
Kim, this such a beautiful, uplifting, deeply spiritual piece! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2021 10:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Janice!
Date: 1/5/2021 10:00:00 AM
I admit I never encountered this form. From what I read it seems to have covered all the necessary rules. Well done and best for a win. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2021 10:05:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! :)

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