Kim

A good friend to us all is our Kim,
Who wears bikinis when off for a swim,
Of course we all dig her,
With her gorgeous figure...
But it’s Jim that Kim is keeping trim.

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/25/2015 5:46:00 PM

One luck man is that Jim to be kept so trim. Cute one had me chuckling. love phyl

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/31/2015 3:58:00 AM

Just a bit of fun to keep my good friend Kim on her toes - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2015 7:38:00 PM

aha, that lucky Jim!!! Looks like I had one other one I had not seen recently. I love finding your limericks!!

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 6/3/2015 6:50:00 PM

G'day Andrea... thanks for your complementing comments Andrea. I must educate myself a bit better. Didn't realize I could fav poets - thanks for your support there too - Lindsay

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/12/2015 10:10:00 PM

HAD to read this one to see if I could identify with my namesake limerick :) Good one !! Don't know about the "gorgeous figure" but, but I love to swim... and I have no Jim in my life... just a Brenton. Thanks for the entertaining write Lindsay xx~xx

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/16/2015 10:14:00 PM

G'day Kim... this limerick is actually about Kim who has poems on this site about Jim the trim. Finding a word to rhyme with Brenton might be difficult, and I'm sure you've got a gorgeous figure - thank you Kim - Lindsay

Paul Callus

Date: 5/7/2015 10:43:00 AM

Kim and Jim the Trim have become a popular part of this site, and you Lindsay, have done well to give them their due merit. Enjoyable limerick:) // paul

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/10/2015 9:28:00 PM

Hello Paul... yes they have Paul, and I believe that Kim lifts our spirits with her positive nature. Thank you Paul - Lindsay

Constance La France

Date: 5/5/2015 6:46:00 AM

Lindsay, great limerick, 7, of course the guys always love a bikini and thanks for visiting my poem, we nurses

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/10/2015 9:21:00 PM

Hullo Broken Wings... I'm not sure if Kim was keen on putting an image of her in a bikini though. Its a pleasure to read your poems - Catch you soon - Lindsay

Tim Smith

Date: 5/4/2015 5:24:00 PM

nice tributick

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/4/2015 10:30:00 PM

G'day Tim... I reckon Kim deserves a bit of recognition. Thanks for reading mate - Lindsay

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/4/2015 8:50:00 AM

lol! WHO wears bikinis? Getting creative with imagination, Lindsay! Now you'll make the soupers cringe! hahaha...But thank you for the laugh. Appreciate much this kindness, my friend. Good evening! 7 Hugs! Kim :) :)

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/4/2015 10:29:00 PM

Hello Kim... yes of course the limerick refers to Jim the trim and your ongoing battle to keep him that way. I don't think there will be too much cringing done; there might be requests for photos. Anyway Kim, with Kim, swim, Jim and trim all rhyming, it took two minutes to jot down. Thanks for not belting me - Lindsay