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Killick Contest

For you, I carry heavy issues difficult to bear;
varied themes with bleary depths as carved by you.
You want me to dismiss all darkness you name light,
to secure your pride’s weight in my ocean of shame
and declare aloud your behooved truths are priceless.
There are no limits to all that you diminish
in me when holding me immobile for your use,
to move me around as your desires so choose.
You know I struggle to be free from your rules,
you have read my clues but are completely immune. 

Floating as tossed in your issues, I feel ropes securing
agitation upon all my twisted, pushed and pulled guilt.
You intend to keep me crippled in this fashion.
I often tread in my dream threads wishing to swim  
far away from the darkness you always fasten.
Someday, I will lose you as a nightmare captain.
Yes, I will disengage, I will make that truth happen.
You will sink or swim in seas you cannot harm or please,
that roll aloof despite your achieved skills to control
and I will thrive living a sanity scrolled, honest life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 8/21/2025 2:08:00 AM
Brilliant write CayCay so deserving of POTD…..Debx
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Date: 8/20/2025 9:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine POTD honor, CayCay! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Your poet friend in Texas. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 8/20/2025 8:47:00 PM
Congratulations, belatedly. I really liked this phrase "someday, I will lose you as a nightmare captain". Uniquely expressed as usual.
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Date: 8/20/2025 8:47:00 PM
Wow. For some reason I checked POTD this evening. Congrats!! You know I love this poem. <3
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Date: 8/20/2025 8:27:00 PM
Wonderful. A POTD for my dear friend from far away. Poetry hugs.
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Date: 8/20/2025 2:20:00 PM
' You intend to keep me crippled in this fashion, holding me immobile for your use. ' Many have gone through this/or they're going through it. Breaking the chains that bind is difficult at times, but it must be done. This thought bring a smile. ' I will disengage, I will make that truth happen. ' That's the way it should be. Many wonderful blessings to you, CayCay. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 8/20/2025 1:22:00 PM
Great write! I love its end, last line :-) Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Have a wonderful day ~ hugs AA
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Date: 8/20/2025 1:22:00 PM
Whew! Hell of a write, CayCay. Both gutsy and gritty - good stuff! :) john
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Date: 8/20/2025 12:21:00 PM
Love this awesome poem, CayCay! Congratulations on POTD. Best wishes. :)
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Date: 8/20/2025 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! You surely have the insight and boldness to divest yourself, body and soul. from this anchor of obtuse sensibility pulling you down in a vise-like grip. Arise, be assertive, breath deeply and live! Imagery is palpable could'nt help but be moved. Praying it's fiction. Poetry hugs__Anaya at the Library :D
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Date: 8/20/2025 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/powerful "Killick Dream Threads" write. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.......
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Date: 8/20/2025 9:24:00 AM
Caycay, I especially like the second stanza of this one, in which you use the metaphor of a captain to capture even greater the effect of the killick image. The title is so interesting too. big congrats on POTD. I never notice those things unless i am told of them. You succeeded with a very difficult contest challenge.
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Date: 8/20/2025 8:46:00 AM
POTD - Say, hey! ~ Willie Mays, the 'Say Hey Kid'... Way to go, CayCay.
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Date: 8/20/2025 8:21:00 AM
Dear CayCay, Your voice is so strong in this piece, even when describing feeling powerless. That tells me everything about who you really are underneath whatever situation inspired this. You're a survivor, a truth-teller, and honestly? A really good poet. Keep writing, keep breaking free, keep being the incredible person you are. Congrats on POTD! Blessings, Dear CayCay, Daniel
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Date: 8/20/2025 6:46:00 AM
Wonderful writing, CayCay. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 8/20/2025 6:37:00 AM
"Run forrest, run"...A shivering display of what poetry can expose to the sunlight
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Date: 8/20/2025 5:18:00 AM
I can feel an intensity in your words, CayCay, nicely written. Congrats on POTD. John
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Date: 8/20/2025 3:47:00 AM
CayCay, so well penned. A powerful poem. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 8/20/2025 3:45:00 AM
returning to congratulate you on your well-deserved POTD!applause
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Date: 8/20/2025 3:05:00 AM
Very powerful write tackling dark themes like I tend to do as well. I know what its like to spend the whole day sleeping rather than facing reality, its horrible. This is very relatable and this verse especially resonates with me "I often tread in my dream threads wishing to swim far away from the darkness you always fasten. Someday, I will lose you as a nightmare captain. Yes, I will disengage, I will make that truth happen."
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Date: 8/20/2025 2:58:00 AM
Powerful verse CayCay, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 8/20/2025 2:48:00 AM
Wonderful poetry, what a wondrous thought it is! I'm pleased you turned against him and seek the path of recovery. A stirring verse of embracing oneself and finding grace anew.
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Date: 8/20/2025 1:18:00 AM
- "I will disengage, I will make that truth happen" ... a deep and powerful poem, CayCay - Excellent for the theme :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - Good luck in the contest ... a winner in my eyes and thoughts :) - hugs
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Date: 8/19/2025 8:24:00 PM
This spoke to me through the imagery and intensity of every line. Wow. Someday I will lose you as a nightmare captain! What an amazing concept! I'm glad you disengage from him and engage in healing. Powerful poem of self love and redemption. You are gifted! Thank you for the encouraging words on my latest poem.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/19/2025 8:34:00 PM
Such generous, uplifting comments, Eileen, THANK YOU. It isn't a personal poem, I wrote it for Craig's Killick contest. My man, I never want to disengage from, not ever. So glad you came by, always enjoy your talented presence. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 8/19/2025 7:21:00 PM
Cut the cords; then play new, melodic chords.
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Paige Hind
Date: 8/20/2025 8:48:00 PM
Awwww :) "Poetry Hugs" <3
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/20/2025 8:45:00 AM
Ha-ha. I've just resigned from my temporary position as 'Drill Sergeant,' Ma'am. lol.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/19/2025 8:35:00 PM
Yes, sir and right away, sir! CayCay
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