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Killer Senryu

cliché cocked packing preloaded words eye on the kill shot ***

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/30/2018 12:50:00 PM

This demands notice, 'packing preloaded words' - potent ammunition!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/14/2018 12:18:00 PM

Ooh, very well done!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2018 9:34:00 AM

Creative one. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my blog. Sara

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/8/2018 3:11:00 AM

But careful dont shoot me!!!!!!!!!!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/8/2018 9:25:00 AM

I aim to stun ;)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/8/2018 3:10:00 AM

LOL this is good love this!!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/8/2018 9:25:00 AM

Cheers mate! xomo :))

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/7/2018 11:38:00 PM

Hahaha! I love this- it definitely lives up to it's title! ;D

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/8/2018 9:24:00 AM

Tee hee! Thankya Rhona! xomo <3

John Lawless

Date: 10/7/2018 10:00:00 PM

...so you are still loading your own ammunition Maureen......good to know!!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/7/2018 11:15:00 PM

Lol! That's how I write ;) xomo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/7/2018 9:16:00 PM

Very nice!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/7/2018 9:29:00 PM

Thanks! ;) xomo!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/7/2018 4:51:00 PM

ha! love it, maureen!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/7/2018 6:24:00 PM

Thank you! xomo :))