Kicking the Habit

By the time I was a score and four
I was retired from overseas duty.
Was husband to an American beauty.
Had smoked at least ten years or more. 

I was hep......  Cool Hand Luke the fool.
John Wayne, all my idols puffed weed.
The movies, sports, all planted the seed.
Be a cat, a lover, all the things so cool. 

Smoke, you fool, that’s the golden rule.
Oh, I quit a thousand times. Not really.
But it went from the sublime to silly.
What I needed was a quitting tool. 

Nothing came out for years, but proof.
If you smoked you would die early.
It would put you in the grave girlie.
They convinced me it was no spoof.

Then about ‘80 came the gum to chew.
Nicotine substitute with a doctor’s care.
Even so, you had to first declare
Ernest intention, a desire to be through.

I bought mine in May of eighty four.
Made up my mind I would like to quit.
The first few days, I was a nervous twit.
I thought “Lord help me, Please, no more”

The secret for me, beyond the Nicorette,
beyond God’s help, and the family grim.
After thirty seconds the want was slim
and I had gotten by with no cigarette.

Enduring thirty seconds at each twinge,
minute by minute, day by day until
my body expunged, the habit was nil.
There was no need to think of a binge.

After a while there was no more want.
Time passed, now nearly thirty years.
My lungs are clean, eased are the fears
wife and children had, their faith I flaunt. 

© Jul 14 2010 For Dane Ann’s “being trapped” contest
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Johnson Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 9:10 PM
You can well be proud you were able to quit this unhealthy habit. And congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Goff Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 4:39 AM
of these things I understand, good one! Charles! jimbo
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations Charles on your well deserved win in Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen's contest "Being Trapped and Breaking Loose". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 2:45 PM
Excellent story and win for you,Charles. I really enjoyed hearing your story. Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 11:33 AM
Congrats Charles on your winning poem in Dane Ann's contest with this marvelous write and wonderful win for u to so enjoy my friend.. with luv
Roberts Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 11:22 PM
hard to quit, good poem on the subject
Brown Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 9:54 AM
I am smiling because of all the wonderful poetry I am reading this morning. Thank you for sharing yours Charles and know that others will draw inspiration from it when they read it. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 1:42 AM
Wow, bravo to you Charles, for kicking the habit and not going back :)! I admire your resolve! I've seen pics of the lungs of heavy smokers and it is enough to let one quit cold turkey too! Me, I've been lucky enough to never have even the desire to try out smoking...wish you the best in the contest! I think you wrote about a great topic with your entry :) -- nikko :)
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