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Key Required - a Jigsaw Puzzle Piece of a Story

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"Key Required - A Jigsaw Puzzle Piece of a Story" "You'll miss me", this said to the girl far away. "I'll leave this here just for you". I've never left. I shall return. A jigsaw puzzle piece of a story with perpetual alternative endings and chapters hidden requiring a key "Blue Highway at the Crossroads" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GRFUx69Jr8U (Lovejoy-Burton/2017 Dec)

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 12/26/2017 9:24:00 PM

Comments said, this to your daughter. I hope she makes your future endings, departures, returns loving.Very Touching!

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 12/26/2017 11:02:00 PM

Thank you Barbara for your kind comments. Love should be so simple, but alas, it's like a Chinese/Japanese puzzle box that can only be opened by solving a puzzle..."LIFE". Some require only a simple move to open and others a series of discoveries. My daughter is on her own journey now, I've left her a few keys if she gets stuck. She is much loved. All the best for you and yours in the New Year.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 12/22/2017 12:26:00 PM

(Georgia) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C_9KurUMNf4

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 12/21/2017 11:12:00 PM

Fabulous Lyrics. "White Rabbit", Jefferson Airplane. (Vintage for Georgia). It is very important what that Door Mouse says... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WANNqr-vcx0

James Swartz

Date: 12/20/2017 8:24:00 AM

Amazing write Leanne. You turned the key and let us into your creative life.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 12/20/2017 1:15:00 PM

It is amazing how much power LOVE can open doors. LOVE is a very powerful force, it's Tsunami waves could wash over this entire planet, if people opened their doors. Merry Christmas to you and yours James.

Silent One

Date: 12/20/2017 5:54:00 AM

Is this a message for your daughter? Very deep...Hope she receives it..

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 12/20/2017 1:17:00 PM

Yes. This story is for my daughter and the Soup and it's mysterious creatures have now entered it's pages. My daughter will receive it's true message when she needs the key most. Merry Christmas to you and yours S.O.Sincerely, Leanne.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 12/19/2017 10:49:00 PM

Some people have neverending stories in them. You have more than stories, you have true "Magic" in your blood Georgia. That is Gold. An ultra-valuable commodity, something worth more than what is placed under a dying tree. In you, that magic lives forever. Never forget that. Keep writing your stories and drawing your "Treasure" Maps - that's how you will find your way "HOME". Love Mum. Christmas 2017.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 12/19/2017 10:40:00 PM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jtbyFxfaBbE

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 12/19/2017 10:30:00 PM

"“This is what I believe: That I am I. That my soul is a dark forest. That my known self will never be more than a little clearing in the forest. That gods, strange gods, come forth from the forest into the clearing of my known self, and then go back. That I must have the courage to let them come and go. That I will never let mankind put anything over me, but that I will try always to recognize and submit to the gods in me and the gods in other men and women. There is my creed.” D.H. Lawrence

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 12/19/2017 10:31:00 PM

Merry Christmas, daughter. Love, as always, your Mother.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 12/19/2017 9:27:00 PM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4BXNRwxNeNM

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 12/19/2017 9:20:00 PM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZiypII-1lh8

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 12/19/2017 9:26:00 PM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iZAd3510ZMY