Kentucky Girl

Kentucky Girl

Passing meadows lush with grass
Rail fences painted white
Stretching off toward distant hills
I observed an remarkable sight

She was a Kentucky girl
Bred from champion stock
Proud and beautiful to see
From head down to fetlock

Her body was magnificent
Sixteen hands in size
A shiny, rippling chestnut coat
White blaze between her eyes

I could see she was a yearling
She had not yet been shod
A girl still basking in her youth
Pawing at the sod.  

It seems she liked to flirt with me
By ignoring my advance
Then moving down the rails a bit
Giving me a sideward glance

She would not let me get too close
Though she had no fear of me
Perhaps she thought I’d harness her
She just wanted to be free

Much time has passed since I saw her
And admired her gentle face
But I know I was just born to watch
While she was born to race


Placed 4th in Carol Browns A Horse Story
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 1:25 PM
Bob, Great to see you in the winner circle friend. Agape, Moses
Quigley Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 9:14 PM
Thank you
Ball Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 4:48 PM
Yes indeed. I'm a horse lover from way back and there is nothing like watching such a beauty as she prances by. Great stuff, really good imagery. God Bless, JB
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 8:11 PM
wow,that last stanza. She was born to race and you just to watch. I love how you related this to a woman. Great comparison and I really enjoyed it. Congrats on your win.
Quigley Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 7:41 AM
Thank you
Taylor Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 4:25 PM
Congrats on your win, Bob. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
Johnson Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 4:11 PM
Perhaps she did turn out to be one of those fabulous Kentucky race horses. Too bad you didn't get her name. Congratulations on a fine win. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 1:35 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Bob
Sweetheart Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 12:39 PM
Congrats Bob on your excellent win in the horse contest with this exciting entry luv.. great story..
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations Bob and thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 6:05 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Bob. I will be back again to read more. Hope you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol
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June 15, 2011 at 1:59 PM
Very nice write Bob... good poetry my friend... MJF
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