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Kentucky Girl

Kentucky Girl Passing meadows lush with grass Rail fences painted white Stretching off toward distant hills I observed an remarkable sight She was a Kentucky girl Bred from champion stock Proud and beautiful to see From head down to fetlock Her body was magnificent Sixteen hands in size A shiny, rippling chestnut coat White blaze between her eyes I could see she was a yearling She had not yet been shod A girl still basking in her youth Pawing at the sod. It seems she liked to flirt with me By ignoring my advance Then moving down the rails a bit Giving me a sideward glance She would not let me get too close Though she had no fear of me Perhaps she thought I’d harness her She just wanted to be free Much time has passed since I saw her And admired her gentle face But I know I was just born to watch While she was born to race Placed 4th in Carol Browns A Horse Story

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/28/2011 1:25:00 PM
Bob, Great to see you in the winner circle friend. Agape, Moses
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Bob Quigley
Date: 6/29/2011 9:14:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 6/24/2011 4:48:00 PM
Yes indeed. I'm a horse lover from way back and there is nothing like watching such a beauty as she prances by. Great stuff, really good imagery. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:11:00 PM
wow,that last stanza. She was born to race and you just to watch. I love how you related this to a woman. Great comparison and I really enjoyed it. Congrats on your win.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 6/24/2011 7:41:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 6/23/2011 4:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Bob. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 6/23/2011 4:11:00 PM
Perhaps she did turn out to be one of those fabulous Kentucky race horses. Too bad you didn't get her name. Congratulations on a fine win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/23/2011 1:35:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Bob
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Date: 6/23/2011 12:39:00 PM
Congrats Bob on your excellent win in the horse contest with this exciting entry luv.. great story..
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Date: 6/23/2011 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations Bob and thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:05:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Bob. I will be back again to read more. Hope you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 1:59:00 PM
Very nice write Bob... good poetry my friend... MJF
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