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KEEPSAKE My Mom Norma, who raised, nurtured and showered me with endearing love, loved diamonds and why not? She was an April baby and diamond is the birthstone. She gave me a diamond ring before she passed away. My eulogy was composed of poem, short story and very short song “Norma in the Sky with Diamonds”. She had also given me several jewelries through the years when she was younger, stronger and full of life. I treasure all the jewelries she gave me, as keepsakes. There is one so special to me, a very special keepsake. It is a very unusual pendant for I have never seen any other pendant like it and I always get the same comment, every time I wear it and also “what a beautiful necklace”. This very special keepsake I call time glass gold dust. It is a one inch pendant made of fourteen karat gold, glass and gold dust or gold powder in the glass shaped as an hourglass with upper bulb and lower bulb with the gold dust staying in the bottom bulb when you wear it. Instead of calling it time glass sand or hourglass or sandglass, I call it time glass gold dust or secondglass for when I turn it over, the gold dust goes to the bottom bulb in a second, as I can only count one, nothing more. Every time I wear this valuable, special keepsake, I get compliments and I imagine her happy face, smiling at me with eyes like diamonds shining so bright and I hum Norma in the Sky with Diamonds. 9/13/21 "K" Contest, New or Old Poetry Constance La France

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Date: 9/15/2021 11:20:00 AM
What a wonderful tribute to "Norma in the sky with diamonds." This is quite the story, well told, flowing like the glass gold dust from one part to the next. Congratulations and blessings!
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/15/2021 12:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. I was wearing it last Sunday and I got so many compliments and I thought of my Mom and I wrote the poem. Have a Blessed day.
Date: 9/15/2021 7:12:00 AM
Marilene, excellent and congratulations on your win in my "K" Contest with this beautiful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/15/2021 8:44:00 AM
Thank you. Thank you. Your contest is such a delight; but challenging bringing out thoughts translated to words... Have a good one, Constance.
Date: 9/14/2021 6:44:00 PM
Beautiful memories are depicted and illustrated vividly. Congratulations!
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/15/2021 12:21:00 AM
Thanks so much, Christuraj.... Have a Blessed Day!!!
Date: 9/13/2021 6:00:00 PM
An enchanting keepsake, and your tribute is heartfelt, Marilene
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/13/2021 6:10:00 PM
Thank you, Mala. She's been gone more than five years; but she is always watching me and I feel her presence sometimes, like being next to me.
Date: 9/13/2021 12:34:00 PM
Hello Marliene oh whata lovely gift. a keepsake forever. blessings my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/14/2021 10:37:00 AM
Hello Marliene, you are welcome. This is a beautiful keepsake. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/13/2021 3:07:00 PM
Thanks so much, Darlene. Yes, a keepsake forever. Blessings to you too. Have a good evening.
Date: 9/13/2021 11:29:00 AM
A lovely tribute!
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/13/2021 11:34:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim. I miss her... penning this poem this morning brought memories of her.

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