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Keeping Still

Keeping Still

The fire has burned low my love. 
I dare not move to fix it. 
You have fallen asleep against my chest.
I feel you breathing.
I hear air, moving… in and out…
as you slumber.

Your hair is a wave of brown, 
like a warm blanket, 
the only comparison, 
a treasure my grandmother, 
would have made by hand.

You smell of the earth. 
The trees and the outside, 
have come inside with you. 
We hiked all morning, 
and now…
they are a pleasant memory, 
swaying my senses 
as I sit holding you close,
in my arms. 

The fire has burned low my love. 
I dare not move to fix it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 2:47 PM
A gorgeous missive, Ann.
Somadas Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 11:44 PM
A moment of joy, beautifully penned..
Foster Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 10:38 AM
Thank you so kindly. Ann
Wolf Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 10:17 PM
Just love the intimate feel of your poems. I'm right into the heart of the poem as soon as I start reading--a tribute to the imagery you create to appeal so deeply to the five senses. Bravo, Ann! Cheers, Gershon
Foster Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 10:21 PM
Oh you are a perfect poet, you sweet talker. Thank you so kindly. Your words lift my heart and make me want to write again... Ann
Wh Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 10:17 PM
I love this. A tender moment capured beautifully.
Foster Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 10:21 PM
I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words. Ann
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