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Keeping Me In Your Heart

Midway through evening light and dawn another passage of tomorrow floats; as whispers are to cotton leaves lingering in some quivers of ticks between warm teapot and lamp’s glow; the phone rings in a hush-a-bye, chiming low, your breath draws a sigh to tell me how workload steals hours from the music of love's call. And I start thinking of unmet dreams, where coffee and Sunday mornings hum while we watch those classic films or drive out of town for a getaway: I light a fragrant candle which reminds me of hours less spent with you; and this time, my breath draws a sigh... yet, the fondness of devotion keeps me from turning away, the one that makes my patience hang on to see us through, if only you would let me into your heart long enough till miles of birds sing our tunes. Contest of Julie Rodeheaver 'Let Me Into Your Heart' 8/21/2017

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Date: 8/29/2017 8:16:00 AM
Beautiful writes as always! Congrats Nette, for your well-deserved second placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/22/2017 1:04:00 PM
Beautiful victory Nette, congratulations...
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Date: 8/22/2017 8:12:00 AM
This is so beautiful, you really do have a wonderful way with words.. some great lines in this one...
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Date: 8/21/2017 8:20:00 PM
This is such a beautiful write , Nette, I see congratulations are in order... Hugs ~*
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Date: 8/21/2017 7:32:00 AM
Congrats!!! my friend...beautiful as ever...your words flow like riveting rivers...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/21/2017 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Nette! Yay!
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Date: 8/21/2017 6:27:00 AM
Congrats nette on your big win!
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Date: 8/21/2017 6:25:00 AM
Lovely and longing, Nette:)
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Date: 8/21/2017 5:24:00 AM
This poem is surely one of my favorites, you can see the romance written in every line of this incredible write! Such a beautiful poem, burning, as a fragrant candle, with true love at every corner of the piece! I loved reading this tremendous poem this morning Nette! What a fabulous piece my friend! Great work!!
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Date: 8/21/2017 4:53:00 AM
- So beautiful soft written, Nette :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/21/2017 4:36:00 AM
Very, very nice, Nette, such gorgeous phrasing and wonderful structure ... love it!
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Date: 8/20/2017 7:05:00 PM
Well articulated, nette--good luck for the contest! The birds will sing your tunes!!
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Date: 8/20/2017 6:35:00 PM
Beautiful to read today Nette. Good luck in the contest :)
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