Keeper of the Night

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I am keeper of the midnight clock
A watchful eye, when darkness peaks
With one eye closed to mock your sleep,
The other eye revolves to keep
the world in check 'till morning breaks

They often wonder where I hide
when evening shadows stretch out long
My saucer eyes, will search the night
as a sentinel until first light

I perch, attached to the red-tile slope
upon the ridge, and then will scope
for predators within the grid
In the shadows of the evening's grace
I'm a silhouette on moonlight's face

You can trust my wisdom and my  song
For I am keen to know, somehow
how time itself, will sway and bend 
I'll stay awhile, become your friend
Then off I'll fly, when summer ends

When first the chill of autumn's call,
you will look for me as twilight falls
to say farewell, for I am called
But, halls of dark are lonely now
Without me there, wind can't compare
For now, you see, the loft is bare

When summer echoes in the wind
it will call for me, and I'll be there

When you hear sounds, much like the wind
You'll know it's me, with a lonely whoooo
I won't be asking who are you
It's just my way, to say I'm home


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2/5//16  Submitted for "Owls" Contest
Sponsored by Eve Roper

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/16/2016 12:38:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your "Owls Personification form WIN." Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:03:00 AM
Wonderful write Carrie n so is the win.. big congrats!
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed this.
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Date: 2/15/2016 10:36:00 PM
This is superb and deserving of your first placement Carrie. #7
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Date: 2/15/2016 5:44:00 PM
Well Done Carrie, congrats on your placement in the contest
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Date: 2/15/2016 10:24:00 AM
Congrats well written x good image x
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Date: 2/15/2016 8:32:00 AM
Very nice study of owls, Carrie. Congratulations on a good win.
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Date: 2/15/2016 6:59:00 AM
Great personification , Carrie. Congratulations on your win for this well penned jewel. Peace
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Date: 2/15/2016 3:32:00 AM
Beautiful personification, Carrie. Many congrats on your top notch placement. Elaine
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Date: 2/14/2016 10:31:00 PM
Carrie, your “Keeper of the Night ” was wonderful! Thank you so much for writing a very special poem for my contest I was honored. Happy Valentine’s Day Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:38:00 AM
- It's not often we see owls, since they are night animals - but they are beautiful creature - Great written Carrie, good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/5/2016 8:37:00 PM
Oh wow i love this poem, beautifully written
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