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Keep Your Head Up

It was but a lonely day on that day Wonder and confusion going through thee My eye caught something standing in the way Is that my beloved in front of me? Such delicate features envelopes her Like the moon dressed white on a summers night Beautiful like the blooming orchids were Yet how could my eyes behold such a sight We were standing in the front of the line Our creator passed judgement to us all There were many names called including mine To my demise I saw my beauty fall Her sinful past gave her a place to dwell But my place was heaven; her place was hell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/23/2012 5:01:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Josemiguel. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2012 8:35:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup. A nice poem to start with. Keep writing and posting.
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