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In flagranti with an unknown lover Sprang apart from underneath the cover How his wife she did shout Now his secret was out - His hidden lover was her own mother! 4th March 2015

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Date: 3/6/2015 9:07:00 AM
Lol. They need to be in jerry springer show!
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:09:00 AM
I never watch that or Jeremy Kyle lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/6/2015 7:24:00 AM
Between you and I, we have a corner on humour... whatcha think! This was fun... huggs, Jacko xxx
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:00:00 AM
We sure do Jack lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/6/2015 7:08:00 AM
Great fun Jan befitting your special sense of wit and humor.Love
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Date: 3/6/2015 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Rajat:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/6/2015 7:00:00 AM
Well done Jan, but I wonder, "Just who got the shorter end of the stick ?"
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Date: 3/6/2015 7:13:00 AM
LOL who knows :-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2015 4:41:00 PM
Great Limerick, Jan. Keeping your witty wits around you:) We've heard of husbands running away with wife's mother!! Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/5/2015 4:44:00 PM
I've heard of it too Paul - I wrote 4 lines of this 2 days before dad died when I had a burst of creativity and wrote 8 poems - finally got round to finishing it:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2015 8:37:00 AM
mamma mia! Thatsa somea kinda domestic pickle. Love, daver
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Date: 3/5/2015 11:43:00 AM
LOL Daver:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2015 7:12:00 AM
Well funny and not so funny..Sad really..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..If for a contest should do well for it has good rhythm, rhyme and flow..Sara
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:19:00 AM
I agree Sara but I do know it happens! Will not put it in the contest - not sure Debbie would approve of my humour on this one:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2015 6:26:00 AM
Very much enjoyed this one Jan.. brought a smile to lighten the day :) bright blessings David
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:18:00 AM
Thanks so much David:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2015 5:10:00 AM
Good one Jan. Put a smile on my face this morning. Have a great day Hugs Janet
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:16:00 AM
Thanks Janet I wrote 4 lines of this before dad died - just needed the final touches and am back to humourous writes which I try and do as often as possible:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2015 3:58:00 AM
What a family! Hilarious but ethically deleterious. Still smiling, dear Jan. A good one!
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Date: 3/5/2015 4:00:00 AM
I have heard it does happen Demetrios - hopefully not in my family lol mum is 92! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/5/2015 2:02:00 AM
Much naughty nightieness, Jan. #7. Viv x
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Date: 3/5/2015 3:59:00 AM
Oh I'm not naughty Mr Viv lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/4/2015 9:57:00 PM
Jan my friend you certainly have a unique style when you write limerick's. I had a good chuckle with this little gem. Definitely a seven. love Shane xxx
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Date: 3/5/2015 3:59:00 AM
Thanks Shane:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 3/4/2015 8:34:00 PM
G'day Jan... What have they put in the water up your way Jan? Thanks for something more to cackle at. Lindsay
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Date: 3/5/2015 3:56:00 AM
I have tried to write with humour since my first poem 'just desserts' Lindsay
Date: 3/4/2015 8:07:00 PM
Whoa! Naughty Jan...that was a bit...lol
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Date: 3/5/2015 3:55:00 AM
lol Kim:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 3/4/2015 5:08:00 PM
OH NOO!!! Thats funny
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Date: 3/4/2015 5:09:00 PM
not if you were the wife I guess Cas lol:-) hugs Jan xxxx
Date: 3/4/2015 4:53:00 PM
I can only concur with Theresa, I recall stories in the media in the UK. I suppose each and everyone to their own, but such does appear on the 'Jeremy Kyle Show' to me it's gutter TV. Once again this evening you've made me smile, hugs, James xx
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Date: 3/4/2015 4:56:00 PM
oohh don't mention that swear word JK - dad used to watch it I would have to go out of the room or a brick would have gone through the TV lol. i wrote all but one line of this 2 days before dad died when I had a burst of creativity! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/4/2015 4:12:00 PM
oh my....now that's keeping it in the family....hugs Tim
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Date: 3/4/2015 4:16:00 PM
pure fiction write on my part Tim lol... but I have heard of it happening! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/4/2015 4:01:00 PM
Love it, jan!!you are SO great with humor. SEVEN
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Date: 3/4/2015 4:03:00 PM
I wasn't sure if my humour would be appreciated in this particular circumstance lol hence not posting it for 'spring' contest lol:-) Hugs jan xx i wrote most of this 2 days before dad died - just needed to do one line:-) Hugs Jan xx