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Keep Faith (Diamante)

Love I'm Turns cold autumn's In sun's heat child, longing Is feathered wax ripe fruits of joy wreck of faith to suckle So leaves till time Fall dies I'm Life autumn's feed us child, longing Winter's gall ripe fruits of joy A temple bare to suckle Echoes loud till time prayers dies knell Life Man Feeds us is more Winter's gall than we tell A temple bare love is life's rose Echoes loud for all climes prayers O keep knell faith Man Love Is more turns cold Than we tell so leaves fall Love is life's rose as feathered wax for all climes in heart's sun O keep dry faith faith cries

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Date: 10/2/2010 1:13:00 PM
LOVE IT!
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:27:00 AM
Simply beautiful and so cleverly presented. Thank you so much for your comments on my poetry. It means a great deal to me. BG
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Date: 9/30/2010 7:47:00 PM
Dear David, Great Shape Poem but the Messageis even better I have a Couple of shape POEMS "Our Glass, Hour Glass" last POEM pg 1 and "Broken Heart" 9th POEM pg 2 If YOU like Read them I would like YOUR Critique YOUR POETRY Friend and Brother...HG
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Date: 9/30/2010 10:18:00 AM
differnt shaped poem.
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