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Karma

Yesterday, I followed her true invisible form Colors turning a kaleidoscopic deep and warm A state of mind, that makes reality feel alive Stabbing moments that teach how tough it is to survive And still this dagger is penetrating into my back real slow Sweeping away the grimace under the rug in a one woman show Illusive dreams asking for more and more Sinking with doom, as karma sways through heaven's door There she keeps her walk on stilts avoiding kismet Removing every single footprint before sunset Spending eternity planning the bliss we cannot see Quenching my confidence, with a moisture that pleasures me Arching a dirty deed, aiming all fingers that point at me Spreading her demonic ecstasy, a mass of light weight, we can't see A giggle-some laugh, I cannot hear Tainted, in a nefarious way as the night disappears Delighted, she glistens through the celestial world alone A whisper of love with an impossible auspicious tone Epic and exquisite, she works incognito striking whomever she wants She Is The Enigma!" She Is the Illness~ that forever haunts A mysterious lady whose perception flows with her own timeless oasis An Empress is working on her own simplicity basis My body impervious to react to conflicts that dwell with deep desire Aggressively my defiant ways will allow her excessive universe to transpire Like a lily we give in to the beauty of her empress exploding ravenous lust It's magical and feeds off of the revenge that deepens with thrust Down in the lilac valley, storming down like a glacier leaving nothing below We caress we emerge, then we dust off the repellent of her forsaken glow Leaving us with wounds, when our conflicts ricochet Impacting us with a rebound when everything bounces back our way She Springs in like a breeze that dwells and leaves gallivant Past shadows, swing back with a darker chant Leaving nothing but a Chinese Aster garden terrace Her crown, sheer vixen and vigor with Victoria's fantastical lace Her candle desalinate effect with a gentle glow Everything to her is an issue with the results that come and go Karma's punishments sail real slow, against the wind, waged by the zephyr Rebuilding from the aftermath of, Karma's payback splenetic weather Close your eyes and feel the consequences we embrace Secretly every wage comes with reward from our hubris sin A grasp with no escapes from the repercussion and deeds in our hearts Doors spillover, in a significant unexplained phenomenal start ...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/1/2014 6:48:00 AM
This is a great poem, Linda. A lot of soul went into this one. It touched my heart and spirit. There is strength, tenderness, power, and all that karma may bring our way. Very well done my friend, very well done!..... Robert.
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Date: 6/25/2014 1:53:00 AM
This is what a special writer is made up of. The ability of expression all the way through, appealing to the senses, where imagery and personification come so easy, even in a long write like this one. This goes in my favs! // paul
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Date: 5/27/2014 7:26:00 AM
Word by word a slow enchanting dance. Under tones of every emotion, well thought out precisely worded piece. :) I enjoyed the trip of images you detailed vividly. cool girl
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Date: 3/30/2014 4:16:00 PM
Thank you A.......... for the win...PD
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Date: 3/25/2014 2:38:00 PM
Hi Linda, Congrats on your wonderful win. It was a very good poem.......Hugs.......Roger
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Date: 3/24/2014 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win ,PD!!! ^__^ ...very fine art for karma... :0))
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Date: 3/24/2014 12:58:00 AM
Very thoughtful expressions on Karma. Congrats on the win, linda
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Date: 3/23/2014 9:37:00 PM
Hi, my dearest sis! An honor for me to read this very precious gems of yours once again (after a long time). A very impressive touching write highlighting the superb & very creative talent of my forever favorite and greatest poet and sis! TYTYSM & my hearty congratulations on your win! This is the best for me. Biggest hugs! By the way, how are u my dearest sis! Hope you're always doing fine. Sending u many loveliest hugs & wishing a great day to u & ur family! Again thank u sm! lovem4ever your sis & BFFLeo
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Date: 3/23/2014 3:21:00 PM
written with much depth, PD.. sweet congrats!..huggs
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Date: 3/23/2014 10:38:00 AM
Great write and win PD...congrats
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Date: 10/24/2013 10:01:00 AM
Hello my friend This is a write full of imagery, imagination, feeling, emotion, honesty and truth. You expressed Karma in a unique way but kept the reader mesmerized. Nice job Hugs
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Date: 7/27/2013 4:59:00 AM
Lovely work Linda.This is one I like very much
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Date: 2/10/2013 8:03:00 AM
Whew!!! wow!! superb write, excellent poet ever...I enjoyed reading it before I go to sleep...two thumbs up to you my dear PD...thanks for being an inspiration. Hugs, Maria :)
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Date: 11/23/2012 2:06:00 AM
Another great one! That was an intense read. I really enjoy your excellent vocabulary in your writing, PD. Keep it going!
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Date: 11/11/2012 9:24:00 PM
You are a one women show! Another amazing write. Good job Linda.
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Date: 8/17/2012 10:44:00 AM
I felt the need to stop by your list of poetry today P.D.... I wish to thank you for your kind words on my writing. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and hope to see you back here Monday. Love, Carol XX
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Date: 8/13/2012 9:28:00 PM
This is another superb poems of yours, PD. I love it so much and so touching. Excellent write by a great poem my dear friend! Thanks for sharing. hugs-leonora
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Date: 8/10/2012 5:46:00 AM
WOW xx
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Date: 8/8/2012 3:02:00 PM
Geez you have at least 3 great verses rolled into one! Loved the vocab and the learned refferances. fav verse [Down in the lilac valley, storming down like a glacier leaving nothing below/We caress we emerge, than we dust off the repellent of her forsaken glow/Leaving us with wounds, when our conflicts ricochet/Impacting us with a rebound when everything bounces back our way]Light & Love
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Date: 7/22/2012 11:40:00 PM
Marvelous-enchanting-terrifying- an extraordinary use of language-truly masterful in tempo & tone,in message -PD.,this composition should merit some fine karma for you;for even Karma has ego and desires praise - only the masters of the craft can manipulate the language as successfully as you do -"as karma sways through heaven's door..." the second verse is my favorite;the last so tutorial-with respect,my Sister of the Quill-J.A.B.
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Date: 7/13/2012 9:41:00 AM
Thankyou for your kind comments I like this poenm alot your words seem to flow I like the way you capture the essenc CAN YOU PLEASE TELL ME HOW TO SOUP BX YOU ABOUT CONTEST I SEND POEM VISULISATION TO YOUR CONTEST FORGOT TO PUT NAME AT BOTTOM ECT CAN YOU LET ME KNOW THANKS IT WOULD BE NICE ALSO TO GET MORE INSIGHT INTO YOUR CREATIVITY X ALWYS DAVID SCOTT
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Date: 7/8/2012 6:11:00 PM
Hi PD - I enjoyed reading your unique poem about karma. You have a definite talent of expressing deep thoughts in a very creative way. Thank you for your support regarding my poems! - Gail
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Date: 6/24/2012 5:44:00 PM
Great write to epitomise the essence of karma.
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Date: 6/14/2012 9:32:00 AM
Speaking of karma. Its better when it happens instantly because the longer it takes the bigger impact it will have. LOL :0
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Date: 6/12/2012 5:12:00 PM
I dont think ive ever read a poets work which is more diverse and so comfortably elegant as yours.... you take the reader on a real ride of the imagination and lead them anywhere and its all so beautiful... bravo dear lady... karen
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