Robb A. Kopp Poet Concrete

Kappa

.                  Mr. Kopp flies his               Kappa kites on nights with
                     kaleidoscope                   skies. Lying
                      on a knoll                       Mr. Ks’
                       dreamy                         eyes    
                        are mesm              erized         
                        as his keel     pulls from 
                        where his body lies.  
                        kites scrapping the night
                        become           kappa knights
                        ridding             kangaroos against
                       storm filled               cloudy  skies.
                       Clouds were               shaped like
                       steamy kettles                 filled with
                       kappa brand                      ketchup covering              
                       kamikaze curly                   styled French-fries

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Carol Sunshine Brown October 20, 2010 at 8:45 AM Congratulations Robb on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Yah for "K"!". Love, Carol

James Fraser October 20, 2010 at 6:06 AM Very clever Robb, it must take ages to get this shape so good. Many congratulations on your win in Nikko's fine contest >> James

Wilma Neels October 20, 2010 at 2:55 AM Interesting Robb, you really went K crazy ;) super congratulations to you!! Wilma

Andrea Dietrich October 19, 2010 at 7:34 PM VERY KOOL with K. Congratulations!!

Deb Wilson October 19, 2010 at 11:56 AM very interesting and well designed! Congratulations! take care~Deb

Francine Roberts October 19, 2010 at 10:41 AM visually awesome piece, congrats on your well deserved win in the contest

Daniel Cwiak October 19, 2010 at 9:46 AM Interesting and resouceful write for the form. Congrats on your win, Robb. ps. I thought the "k" was only supposed to be use three times...

John Freeman October 19, 2010 at 9:22 AM "Unique Koncrete you have set in form, Robb. Smile. "Congratulations!" Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson October 19, 2010 at 9:07 AM lVery kute, very klever, very worthy. Kongratulations. Love, J

Carolyn Devonshire October 19, 2010 at 7:47 AM I knew this would be a winner, Robb. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta October 19, 2010 at 7:05 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Robb

Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 19, 2010 at 6:48 AM First time I saw this I was like Oh WOW!! how Kool!! and it's such a beautiful K too!! Totally enjoyed your klever alliteration here too (haha now you have going krazy on the k's)!! enjoyed the adventure you wove here, Mr. Kopp now I am also karving for those kamikaze kurly fries!! Super congrats on your 3rd place win !!-- nikko :)

Barbara Gorelick October 19, 2010 at 6:34 AM Just to clever. congrats..youve left me yearning for a plate of fries. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 19, 2010 at 5:54 AM Congrats Robb on your super win in Nikko's K contest with this outstanding design and poem..enjoy luv.. a special victory ...

Charles Henderson September 27, 2010 at 11:19 PM You did good on this one Mr. Kopp. "kamikaze french fries? I like!!

Diane Locksley September 27, 2010 at 12:57 PM K-K-K-Kan you read this aloud three times fast, Robb? Love the alliteration and the way you created the "K" in your poem. Nikko will like this one. Good luck in the contest. Diane

Francine Roberts September 27, 2010 at 11:52 AM that was adorable

Susan Palli September 27, 2010 at 11:33 AM Lots of talent!

Carolyn Devonshire September 27, 2010 at 11:23 AM Very creative imagery and outstanding alliteration for the "K" contest, Robb. The letter "K" takes on a life of its own in your concrete poem. Terrific! Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn