Kaleidoscopic

In childhood, we saw our tiny world
in brightest kaleidoscopic shades.
There were no greys, only brilliant swirls
of colors that formed vibrant parades
and danced among peridot-green blades.
Our days were varicolored landscapes
of flowers, many sizes and shapes.
We created our secret pathways
dropping blossoms to find our escapes
Childhood's rare world of halcyon days.

As poets, we long to find those times
of innocence and wonders unknown.
We sprinkle colors into our rhymes
But gardens of youth have overgrown
and grey slipped in at edges unsown.
At a fair, is a man making grand
"Kaleidoscopes: Their View Is At Hand!"
As myriad colors of glass spill,
I catch my breath as designs expand
in hues of a world I long for still.

March 10, 2023
for "Word Challenge--K Words Contest"
by Constance La France
howmanysyllables: 9
First Place
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Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 6:07 AM
I have read your winner in Constance's contest and found it interesting. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 3:25 PM
Ann, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Poet Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 2:25 PM
Congratulations on your win, Ann. What a beautiful and lovely poem. Blessings
Peck Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 9:47 AM
How kind of you, Lasaad! And thanks for the blessings.
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 2:00 PM
- Lovely conjuring with colors, Ann :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations on your win. A fun write. I also loved the "Kaleidoscopic" with the many fun colors. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
Peck Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 9:40 AM
Thanks, Paula. I would love to have one today, I think. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 8:52 AM
I always loved peering into the tube and admiring the patters.
Peck Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 10:25 AM
I simply loved those colorful designs, each different! Thanks for commenting, Victor.
Faulkner Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 8:39 AM
Yes as poets we try to recapture the colors of our childhood imagination, love your lines 'colors that formed vibrant parades' and 'myriad colors of glass spill' - don't we all still long for them~
Peck Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 10:22 AM
Yes, I think we do. As a child, I was mesmerized for hours by my kaleidoscope. I think I learned to love colors then. Thank you, Michelle, for liking those lines! I changed a line following "parade," that I should have kept. Ah, well...
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