Kaleidoscope of Wish

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Written; September 29, 2023 Etheree Contest Sponsored by: Ink Empress __________________________________________________________ This morning bursts by dawn sunshine fingers Crouch to clasp the clay the whole verve wakes afresh the dawn billow swells and bakes It was parched in the sun and stream soaked from the storm that walloped at night branches belt sunbeams bring bleak buds and blooms Wake wonderment whirled awkwardly wasteful Let the autumn swarm scheme to this trance swap me when the sun steals the dawn fungible fate frost snowfall splash ebony twilight rosy, scarlet, green with cosmic fire sullen night aloft trill

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/12/2023 7:47:00 AM

I love this one Las. Your images burn in my mind! Congratulations! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/11/2023 10:52:00 AM

- You describe this gem with beauty, Las - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/11/2023 10:36:00 AM

Congratulations!

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/11/2023 10:00:00 AM

You've painted a detailed dawn the imagery is truly amazing. Shaping a diamond, success! The picture chosen is stunning as well. Congratulations on your win, Sotto Poet! xhugs

Ink Empress

Date: 10/11/2023 8:18:00 AM

Dear Sotto, I absolutely always love imagery in an etheree, and especially a double one! Love the way this flows and your syllables are on point! You’ve gone very descriptive in such eloquence, and unique diction! And ways of expressing! I especially loved “ sunshine fingers” “ ebony twilight” and various shades of colors you’ve used to paint imagery. Thank you for writing! Congratulations on winning. Pleasure reading this, as always a magical one!

Sotto Poet
Date: 10/11/2023 9:39:00 AM

Dear Ink, thank you so much for sponsoring contests and for coming up with wonderful ideas. Much appreciate your reading placing and uplifting comment on my poem. Blessings

Karen Jones

Date: 9/30/2023 8:36:00 AM

Love the word choice and it is beautifully presented. Great job. Good luck in the contest.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/29/2023 12:54:00 PM

How masterfully crafted, Sotto! I admire your word choice and the ability to create a diamond shape. Doing so takes both talent and patience. I really liked 'sunshine fingers.' I think of those words the next time I'm out walking just at dawn. Enjoy your weekend, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/29/2023 12:03:00 PM

A diamond of a poem, so well constructed and so meaningful, Sotto. Well done.