Kaleidoscope of Wish

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Written; September 29, 2023
Etheree Contest                                      Sponsored by: Ink Empress  

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This
morning
bursts by dawn
sunshine fingers
Crouch to clasp the clay
the whole verve wakes afresh
the dawn billow swells and bakes
It was parched in the sun and stream
soaked from the storm that walloped at night
branches belt sunbeams bring bleak buds and blooms
Wake wonderment whirled awkwardly wasteful
Let the autumn swarm scheme to this trance
swap me when the sun steals the dawn
fungible fate frost snowfall
splash ebony twilight
rosy, scarlet, green
with cosmic fire
sullen night
aloft
trill

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/12/2023 7:47:00 AM

I love this one Las. Your images burn in my mind! Congratulations! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/11/2023 10:52:00 AM

- You describe this gem with beauty, Las - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/11/2023 10:36:00 AM

Congratulations!

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/11/2023 10:00:00 AM

You've painted a detailed dawn the imagery is truly amazing. Shaping a diamond, success! The picture chosen is stunning as well. Congratulations on your win, Sotto Poet! xhugs

Ink Empress

Date: 10/11/2023 8:18:00 AM

Dear Sotto, I absolutely always love imagery in an etheree, and especially a double one! Love the way this flows and your syllables are on point! You’ve gone very descriptive in such eloquence, and unique diction! And ways of expressing! I especially loved “ sunshine fingers” “ ebony twilight” and various shades of colors you’ve used to paint imagery. Thank you for writing! Congratulations on winning. Pleasure reading this, as always a magical one!

Sotto Poet
Date: 10/11/2023 9:39:00 AM

Dear Ink, thank you so much for sponsoring contests and for coming up with wonderful ideas. Much appreciate your reading placing and uplifting comment on my poem. Blessings