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Kaleidoscope Eyes

He had magic, kaleidoscope eyes! Now some may scoff at such a thing! They don't share my joy of living in his mesmerizing sight. Nor the dewy twinkles of that magical San Francisco, foggy, midnight. His first, warm, yet oh,so silent breath upon my awaiting cheek. Knees crumbling, my world falling asunder. My heart pounding in my ears like a spring's sudden most welcomed, thunder. In those dreamy, lusty charms, I wanted always to live under.                   June 23, 2020                     11am PST                   Poem # 1,305

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Date: 6/24/2020 10:38:00 AM
Loved this one, now this is poetry!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/24/2020 12:21:00 PM
DING...OMG, you just colored my world, beautiful! Bless you John. Panagiota xxoo
Date: 6/24/2020 6:13:00 AM
I didnt think your poem was sensual, i was talking in general about poems that do not get views etc, for example, sensual ones...
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/24/2020 6:55:00 AM
Same time tomorrow? Are you trying to kill me? Join the mob. Here with torchlights and hooting."Boo" Will check out your Poetry tomorrow, dude! Ty for explaining...pr
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Silent One
Date: 6/24/2020 6:41:00 AM
Some are frigid here but not all...I posted a sensual one today... Enjoyed our little mini blog...Same time tomorrow? I hope you have a lovely day
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/24/2020 6:38:00 AM
Let me find some hot poems by males tomorrow, like later. Wii send to you, Women as you know are not thirteen anymore. No matter what I write, it all plain sucks to most here. But, Silent One, that does not mean a anything anymore. It means a certain group here does not like it. And that's fine, let's end the mini blog here. Thank you. I got to know myself better. And appreciate myself more and for that, I heartily thank you...PR
Date: 6/24/2020 6:12:00 AM
Lol.. was that your morning rant? To be honest, im not a fan of political poetry, i dont even like watching the news.. i just like to surround myself with beauty :))) also, what is true for one, is not truth for others, such is the human mind.. like one mans freedom fighter is another mans terrorist.. see now you got me all political lol
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Silent One
Date: 6/24/2020 6:39:00 AM
Hmmmm..I'm sending you a virtual hug... Smile :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/24/2020 6:29:00 AM
Thank you great points. PR. I loathe ""rant""... It's a cop out term when another is truthful. It is demeaning, too. Good, hug some trees, swim in waves. Many do. Some smoke ganja, or get loaded. Anything but the truth. Sorry to commit that most grievous and heinous of all crimes...being a political animal. I rarely watch it. Just what they want. Am ignorant public. Then watch all the blame after an election. Gee, PR
Date: 6/24/2020 2:19:00 AM
Maybe just a coincidence dear poet... But I do notice that some do not comment on sensual poems... Sometimes it's a matter of who views the poem too.... Hope you are have a lovely summer.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/24/2020 5:06:00 AM
Hi Silent, I write because I am who I am. Simple. Those blue noses who won't read it, ah well! That's perfectly OK. I consider this poem far from sensual. Why are we stuck here in the 12th grade anal talk that gets rave comments. You tell me. Also they are scared of political poetry unless far left. I do mean Communistic. What the? Poets so fearful of being unpopular? They march like wooden soldiers in lines! I think they are capable of blossoming into more than forms and trophy winners. Being genuine tops winning or having one's arse smooched daily, I think. Summer is hot here. Very insane and bossed with masks. Truth no longer matters. Land of anarchists stealing our freedoms. See my other poems just posted. You kill me, Silent One! Had no idea poets were virginal, chaste gods and goddesses. Let them not read me. Am here to write not to smooch arses. Love you Panagiota.xo
Date: 6/23/2020 5:11:00 PM
Was he Greek? Lol Bet that made you smile :))
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/23/2020 6:14:00 PM
Interesting how not one Poetess has responded to this. Men....do. Zowie! Love you guys...thank you, three!.. Thanks for your explaining later, stuff here. Makes no sense in my head. I have seen teachers play the virginal stance game. I did not know sex was an evil thing to Poets. Men here do post sensual poems here. Women? A few. Gads its like 1950 in here. Don't people see ugly sex in movies? I never write like they do. I don't write porn. I am not a female Ron Jeremy. The "saints" in here will not know who he is. Gees! PR. Nobody in PS ever had sex? Just been quilling and talking to muses! That is both unrealistic and sad and worse a lie and utter fabrication. Panagiota xxx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/23/2020 6:10:00 PM
Was waiting with baited breath for your question! Methinks you already knowest the answer..)))) Of course, I am smiling! Widely! Panagiota xoxo
Date: 6/23/2020 3:28:00 PM
The eyes have it! … A captivating poem, Panagiota. You are not the only one captivated here! Cheers, Gershon
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/23/2020 4:16:00 PM
Aye, matey. Come aboard the great ship.... ship, SS Kaleidoscope Eyes! Amd no, this was not based on " Lucy in the Sky with diamonds" by the Beatles, thanks..Panagiota xo
Date: 6/23/2020 1:37:00 PM
Your pen is on fire tonight with romantic verse Panagiota. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/23/2020 1:55:00 PM
Yes it is..and bet, greatly disliked)))) Go figure Tom. I cannot. Ready to break my quill in pieces. Gees. Panagiota xo

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