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Kaleidoscope and Harpsichord

Kaleidoscope and Harpsichord My wife has a problem with any poem I give her to read for a second opinion especially when the poem has no message and my goal is simply to hear what I'm saying and not care if I understand it. As I have told her before, the meaning of any poem for me lies in the marriage of cadence and sound, little more. The other night in bed i gave her another poem to read and afterward she said it was no different than the others. She had hoped I'd improve. Reading it, she said, was like looking through a kaleidoscope while listening to a harpsichord. What more can a man looking for lines ask for in a wife than that? Donal Mahoney

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Date: 4/14/2010 7:19:00 AM
too funny--wives are the worst critics but we also love more completely.
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