Justice Getting What She Deserves

"Keep walkin, caus we ain't talkin crazy long legs!"

"You're such a weirdo."
"We don't want you round here!"
"Can't you take a hint??"
"What a loser."

She walks away
Like she's walked away
Five hundred and one times before
What has she done?
Why do they hate her so?
Running now 
Into the bathroom
She can't let them see her tears
Black mascara runs down her pale white skin

Mercifully no one follows her
Looking in the mirror
She wishes she could disappear
Vanish without a trace
"Stork Girl"
"Big Bird"
"Amazon Woman"
"The Laughing Giraffe"
If only she could be small 
Pretty
Like those other girls
The cool cruel ones

She didn't need them to be her friend
All she wanted was to be left alone
To come to school and go home
To have a single quiet day
A "don't stare at me!" day
She takes a tissue out of her purse
Removes the mascara from her eyes and face
Fixes her hair
Takes a deep breath
and goes to her next class

She sits at the back of the class
Never at the front
The new boy
The cool boy
Smiling says hi
He's tall
Like her
Emotions stir

After class he says
"Can you show me around?"
She smiles back and says "Sure"
She can't believe he wants her to
She says "My name is Sue"
He says "I'm glad to meet you, 
my name is Simon Loo.
As they walk together down the hall
One of the mean girls
Calls out "Why are you hanging out with big bird!
He turns and says "Get lost loser, Sue's the nicest 
and prettiest girl in the school!"
Sue smiles and takes his hand
Suddenly she doesn't wish to be invisible any more.

By: Richard Lamoureux
For Justice Contest
Written September 3rd 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sassy Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 12:10 AM
Richard ... I can't wait to show this to my granddaughter ... she was 6' by the time she was 15. She's always been the tallest until she got into high school and felt out of place. Now she doesn't stand out in a crowd because she's tall ... she stands out now because she's proud and has an air of confidence about her. Lovely poem with great ending.....Sassy
Tagore Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 11:40 PM
Wonderful write... Congrats. Regards, Bobby
Haight Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 12:58 PM
A great poem about justice, Richard. I really enjoyed your write and congratulate you on your nice win. Sandra
Tor Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 11:30 AM
Richard much congratulations. Ps I read your short story on the reunion. Waiting for a novel from you! Loved it wanted more.
A  Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Richard, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Kimathi Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 4:50 PM
I really enjoyed your work. Congrats Richard! ;-)
Allison Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 2:55 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Richard:-) hugs jan xx
Reams Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 1:46 PM
Fantastic Write Richard! The words you used in name calling hits it right in the spot that really hurts. Great awareness in this write. Thank you for entering into my contest.
Lindley Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 12:04 PM
Great poem my friend. I always took up for the victims of such ignorant tormenting by others. Kids are so often so very cruel and have not a clue how much it may hurt the victim-sometimes scars for life! A7 pm on the way.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 12:52 PM
Thanks Robert, I also appreciate the heads up on the typo.
Tor Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 5:58 AM
High school teenagers can be so cruel. This reminds me of a poor girl Vicki who the masses victimize. You know its really sad. Because these poor souls that succumb to these torments never enjoy or go to a high school reunion. Their experience has traumatize and embarrass them so much they want to forget high school and the jerks that picked on them. So sad. Great write.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 9:00 AM
A very thoughtful comment Michael.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Sad at first but am glad you shed light at the end... =')!!~Olive Eloisa
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Thanks Olive.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 7:08 AM
The sword of justice is the sharpest of all! Excellent development, exceptional finish! A seven dear, Richard!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios.
Smith Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 7:48 PM
Wonderful poem Richard...School years are so difficult with kids developing at different rates, The Ugly Duckling Syndrome turning into a beautiful swan.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 9:01 AM
Thanks atom.
Roper Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 6:13 PM
Wow, you made my cry boy........ Awesome write a 7 and a winner in my eyes. Hugs Eve
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 9:04 AM
Thanks Eve.
Callus Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 4:53 PM
Love this write, Richard; justice is served. A sad heart-aching start, but such a nice positive ending! // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 9:01 AM
Thanks Paul.
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September 2, 2015 at 2:22 PM
This reminds me of the movie; "Shes all that" with Freddie Prince and the girl who played Lanney, I hope I spelled that right write..yep, I knows all too well about these issues, having been raised with six sisters. I didn't have such problems myself, I was the ruffian in the schools, and not the bullie dear poet, I would kick their a** ooooo I could not stands the bullie! I boxed for my neighborhood as a kid! Always won! (-1) Great impromptu write Richard. Have a great day sir..much love, james
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 9:03 AM
I've never tried boxing but I do enjoy watching it, much to the displeasure of my wife who finds it barbaric. Thanks for commenting.
Andresen Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 2:10 PM
- A pleasure to read ..... give me a great feeling of justice - I wish you good luck in the contest, Richard - (I quit posting for contest) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
A. Sharma Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 11:45 AM
Positivity oh I love so much Richard! Gl in contest!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 12:02 PM
Thanks Upma, I made some changes at the beginning.
Martin Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 11:41 AM
Loved this and the theme! Great use of dialogue. A 7 at least!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Thanks Thomas, I wasn't sure where I was going with this one when I started but it seemed to somehow come together. I made a few changes at the beginning. Thanks as well for the 7.
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 11:22 AM
Fabulous descriptive write - so glad it had a happy positive ending - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 12:07 PM
I am a fan of happy endings, thanks Jan Hugs Rick.
Manassian Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 11:13 AM
Lovely, Richard....Way to write about Sue, dear. It's always nice when the mean girls get a kick in the pants....This is justice...the sweet way. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 12:09 PM
The great thing is she didn't have to go down to their level. Thanks for liking this one Eileen. Hugs Rick.
Nunez Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Nice dip into teenage angst, Rick. Lovely story. All the best int eh contest. hugs!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 12:09 PM
Thanks for the luck and the hug Kim. Hugs back to you.
La France Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 10:34 AM
Richard, I loved this story, as a bullied child myself your words ring true, I still recall that girl who would not look at anyone in the face, magnificent the way you see the world in words, and I am so happy you like my poem for you ~~
Lamoureux Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 12:10 PM
Yes I like it very much, you got to the heart and in an artistic way.
Godwin Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 10:21 AM
I really enjoyed the ride of her pain bursting into joy. Good write ... CayCau
Lamoureux Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 10:31 AM
Thanks CayCay!
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