Paghunda Zahid | + Follow Poet |
Couplet | + Fav Poem | Comment | Email | Print |

Just Your Face

Futile is the sun to a heart in awe
And trivial is the moon's cosmic fame

All these voices are nothing but noises 
These Flowers are like invisible stars

For what's it that the universe contains 
Nothing... but your face to keep me sane 

Only your voice brings exceptional joy
Only your lovely smile can make me fly





Syllable count: 10 per line
27th July, 2020

Copyright © Paghunda Zahid | Year Posted 2022

Please Login to post a comment

1 2

Gail Debole Date: 8/2/2025 2:17:00 PM Lovely tribute to a loved one. Stated in a uniquely creative way. Login to Reply

Michael Kalavik Date: 1/31/2023 7:11:00 PM The initial couplet is perfect! It should be carved in stone for the ages. The rest seems a bit vague and untidy to my mind, but might be fashioned into a masterpiece given proper love and attention. But that's just like my opinion, dude. Be well! Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 2/18/2024 9:26:00 AM I highly appreciate your opinion dear Michael. Thank you for the wonderful remarks.

Harry Horsman Date: 8/21/2022 7:51:00 PM Oh POTW, and deserved, just love this journey you take me on. Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 10/21/2022 11:33:00 AM My pleasure Harry

Susan Lawrence Date: 8/6/2022 6:00:00 PM I adore this beautiful expression of love Paghunda ! So lovely in every way . A fav for me. Big congratulations on POTW! Hugs to you and all good wishes, Susan :) Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/19/2022 10:05:00 AM I'm glad you liked it. I'm honoured and delighted. . Thank you

Len Gasun Date: 8/6/2022 7:37:00 AM So glad to come back here and found this excellent write my dear friend Paghunda. I like this precious gem of yours a lot. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTW honor! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/19/2022 10:08:00 AM I relish your thoughts and I'm pleased to know that you enjoyed this poem. Thank you

Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/5/2022 3:44:00 PM Congratulations on poem of the week Paghunda, lovely couplets… Belle Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/19/2022 10:08:00 AM Thanks Belle

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/5/2022 2:26:00 PM The sentiment expressed in this beautiful poem warms the heart Paghunda. Congratulations on your deserving POTW honor. This gem is going into my Faves! Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/19/2022 10:09:00 AM I am so pleased to know that you liked my poem.. Thank you for your precious words, they mean a lot coming from a grand poetess of your finesse. I'm truly honoured. Thank you

Paulette Calasibetta Date: 8/3/2022 6:48:00 PM Paghunda, congratulations on your Poem of the Week! Your sentiment is filled with pure JOY! Lovely write. :)Paulette Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/19/2022 10:10:00 AM Thanks a lot

Susan Ashley Date: 8/2/2022 8:24:00 AM Dear Paghunda, I am so delighted to return to this exquisite poem and offer my heartiest congratulations for receiving POTW honors. A worthy and well deserved choice. Your poem is gem, enjoy the accolades! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/3/2022 2:29:00 AM Dear Susan, Your gracious visit and heartwarming congrats are received with immense gratitude. The rapture in my heart is priceless. I am truly delighted by your return, and your endearing remarks. Thank you

Karen Jones Date: 8/1/2022 4:12:00 PM What a lovely potw! Congrats Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/3/2022 2:24:00 AM Thanks

Bill Baker Date: 8/1/2022 9:41:00 AM Congratulations on your POTW, Paghunda We all need something or someone to hold onto, my friend. Thanks for sharing your inspirational source. Bill Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/2/2022 6:47:00 AM Humbled..!! I relish your sweet remarks. Your wonderful presence is a delight to behold Bill Baker.

John Watt Date: 8/1/2022 7:53:00 AM Nice contrasts between the things that don't satisfy and the one thing that does. "Only your lovely smile can make me fly" is such a beautiful line. Congratulations on your POTW acknowledgment ~ John Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/1/2022 9:55:00 PM I am enchanted by the blissful spell your uplifting presence casts upon me as I revel in your thoughts.. Thank you John

I Am Anaya Date: 7/31/2022 7:23:00 PM Congratulations on POTW! I am drawn to your poem Paghunda. At times the only thing that could keep me going was the same as you described in couplets three and four! You'll be just fine, keep writing! ;) Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/1/2022 9:55:00 PM Indeed... My pleasure

Brandy Nicole Date: 7/31/2022 6:04:00 PM "Flowers are like invisible stars". Such a beautiful image. Your thoughts are soft, tender and romantic. Congratulations Paghunda, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Brandy Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/1/2022 9:58:00 PM Thank you for sharing your precious thoughts with me, I hold your endearing words in my deepest appreciation... Blessings

Constance La France Date: 7/31/2022 4:38:00 PM Paghunda, lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor, blessings ~Constance Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 8/1/2022 9:59:00 PM POTW really made me happy... Thank you

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/31/2022 8:41:00 AM Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed your write. Have a blessed day/week................. Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 7/31/2022 11:13:00 AM Thank you

Paulette Calasibetta Date: 7/31/2022 8:13:00 AM Congratulations on your POTW! You have crafted a delightful poem that renders the joy of life. Kudos! :)Paulette Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 7/31/2022 11:16:00 AM Your words are held in gratitude. Blessings

Vijay Pandit Date: 7/31/2022 6:17:00 AM BIG congrats on POTW! So well penned, especially the two ending lines. Enjoy your day and the week. Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 7/31/2022 11:17:00 AM Thank you

David Kavanagh Date: 7/31/2022 4:04:00 AM Congratulations Paghunda, on your joyful POTW, you appear to have captured that X-factor, that enhances and makes our lives worthwhile, excellent penning, cheers David Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 7/31/2022 11:17:00 AM Indeed.. Can't agree more

Tania Kitchin Date: 7/31/2022 3:54:00 AM Paula, a well done, heartfelt poem, congratulations on POTW! Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 7/31/2022 11:59:00 AM Means a lot. Thank you

Tom Cunningham Date: 7/31/2022 1:23:00 AM Back with congratulations Paghunda on the honour of POTW. Enjoy your day. Tom Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 7/31/2022 1:54:00 AM Oh really... That's a good news.... Thank you

Robert Gorelick Date: 7/30/2022 12:01:00 PM A love brightly burning often leaves all else shrouded in obscurity, at least for a while. Lovely, Robert Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 7/31/2022 4:13:00 AM Thank you

Timothy Ray Date: 7/29/2022 12:03:00 PM well done....a great capture of Love....take a gracious bow, well deserved Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 7/31/2022 1:54:00 AM Thanks Timothy

Panagiota Romios Date: 7/27/2022 5:37:00 PM A lovely write! My fav line …which is so beautiful: “These flowers are like invisible stars” An amazing expression ! Thank you. Pangiota xxx Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 7/31/2022 4:16:00 AM Thank you

Vladislav Raven Date: 7/27/2022 4:13:00 PM Hi Paghunda, this is an exceptional write. To find and hold love is the greatest gift of all. Your words inspire the heart to take flight. Such strong images displayed. The emotion is deep. Have a wonderful evening ..... Mike. Login to Reply Paghunda Zahid Date: 7/31/2022 4:16:00 AM Thank you for gracing my poem with the power of your rich poetic presence. The rapture in my heart is priceless. such is the bliss you bestow.

1 2