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Just Your Face

Futile is the sun to a heart in awe And trivial is the moon's cosmic fame All these voices are nothing but noises These Flowers are like invisible stars For what's it that the universe contains Nothing... but your face to keep me sane Only your voice brings exceptional joy Only your lovely smile can make me fly Syllable count: 10 per line 27th July, 2020

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Michael Kalavik

Date: 1/31/2023 7:11:00 PM

The initial couplet is perfect! It should be carved in stone for the ages. The rest seems a bit vague and untidy to my mind, but might be fashioned into a masterpiece given proper love and attention. But that's just like my opinion, dude. Be well!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/18/2024 9:26:00 AM

I highly appreciate your opinion dear Michael. Thank you for the wonderful remarks.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/21/2022 7:51:00 PM

Oh POTW, and deserved, just love this journey you take me on.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/21/2022 11:33:00 AM

My pleasure Harry

Susan Lawrence

Date: 8/6/2022 6:00:00 PM

I adore this beautiful expression of love Paghunda ! So lovely in every way . A fav for me. Big congratulations on POTW! Hugs to you and all good wishes, Susan :)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/19/2022 10:05:00 AM

I'm glad you liked it. I'm honoured and delighted. . Thank you

Len Gasun

Date: 8/6/2022 7:37:00 AM

So glad to come back here and found this excellent write my dear friend Paghunda. I like this precious gem of yours a lot. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTW honor! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/19/2022 10:08:00 AM

I relish your thoughts and I'm pleased to know that you enjoyed this poem. Thank you

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/5/2022 3:44:00 PM

Congratulations on poem of the week Paghunda, lovely couplets… Belle

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/19/2022 10:08:00 AM

Thanks Belle

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/5/2022 2:26:00 PM

The sentiment expressed in this beautiful poem warms the heart Paghunda. Congratulations on your deserving POTW honor. This gem is going into my Faves! Blessings xxoo

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/19/2022 10:09:00 AM

I am so pleased to know that you liked my poem.. Thank you for your precious words, they mean a lot coming from a grand poetess of your finesse. I'm truly honoured. Thank you

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 8/3/2022 6:48:00 PM

Paghunda, congratulations on your Poem of the Week! Your sentiment is filled with pure JOY! Lovely write. :)Paulette

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/19/2022 10:10:00 AM

Thanks a lot

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/2/2022 8:24:00 AM

Dear Paghunda, I am so delighted to return to this exquisite poem and offer my heartiest congratulations for receiving POTW honors. A worthy and well deserved choice. Your poem is gem, enjoy the accolades! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/3/2022 2:29:00 AM

Dear Susan, Your gracious visit and heartwarming congrats are received with immense gratitude. The rapture in my heart is priceless. I am truly delighted by your return, and your endearing remarks. Thank you

Karen Jones

Date: 8/1/2022 4:12:00 PM

What a lovely potw! Congrats

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/3/2022 2:24:00 AM

Thanks

Bill Baker

Date: 8/1/2022 9:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTW, Paghunda We all need something or someone to hold onto, my friend. Thanks for sharing your inspirational source. Bill

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/2/2022 6:47:00 AM

Humbled..!! I relish your sweet remarks. Your wonderful presence is a delight to behold Bill Baker.

John Watt

Date: 8/1/2022 7:53:00 AM

Nice contrasts between the things that don't satisfy and the one thing that does. "Only your lovely smile can make me fly" is such a beautiful line. Congratulations on your POTW acknowledgment ~ John

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/1/2022 9:55:00 PM

I am enchanted by the blissful spell your uplifting presence casts upon me as I revel in your thoughts.. Thank you John

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/31/2022 7:23:00 PM

Congratulations on POTW! I am drawn to your poem Paghunda. At times the only thing that could keep me going was the same as you described in couplets three and four! You'll be just fine, keep writing! ;)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/1/2022 9:55:00 PM

Indeed... My pleasure

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/31/2022 6:04:00 PM

"Flowers are like invisible stars". Such a beautiful image. Your thoughts are soft, tender and romantic. Congratulations Paghunda, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Brandy

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/1/2022 9:58:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your precious thoughts with me, I hold your endearing words in my deepest appreciation... Blessings

Constance La France

Date: 7/31/2022 4:38:00 PM

Paghunda, lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor, blessings ~Constance

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/1/2022 9:59:00 PM

POTW really made me happy... Thank you

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/31/2022 8:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed your write. Have a blessed day/week.................

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/31/2022 11:13:00 AM

Thank you

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 7/31/2022 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTW! You have crafted a delightful poem that renders the joy of life. Kudos! :)Paulette

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/31/2022 11:16:00 AM

Your words are held in gratitude. Blessings

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/31/2022 6:17:00 AM

BIG congrats on POTW! So well penned, especially the two ending lines. Enjoy your day and the week.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/31/2022 11:17:00 AM

Thank you

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/31/2022 4:04:00 AM

Congratulations Paghunda, on your joyful POTW, you appear to have captured that X-factor, that enhances and makes our lives worthwhile, excellent penning, cheers David

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/31/2022 11:17:00 AM

Indeed.. Can't agree more

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/31/2022 3:54:00 AM

Paula, a well done, heartfelt poem, congratulations on POTW!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/31/2022 11:59:00 AM

Means a lot. Thank you

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/31/2022 1:23:00 AM

Back with congratulations Paghunda on the honour of POTW. Enjoy your day. Tom

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/31/2022 1:54:00 AM

Oh really... That's a good news.... Thank you

Robert Gorelick

Date: 7/30/2022 12:01:00 PM

A love brightly burning often leaves all else shrouded in obscurity, at least for a while. Lovely, Robert

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/31/2022 4:13:00 AM

Thank you

Timothy Ray

Date: 7/29/2022 12:03:00 PM

well done....a great capture of Love....take a gracious bow, well deserved

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/31/2022 1:54:00 AM

Thanks Timothy

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/27/2022 5:37:00 PM

A lovely write! My fav line …which is so beautiful: “These flowers are like invisible stars” An amazing expression ! Thank you. Pangiota xxx

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/31/2022 4:16:00 AM

Thank you

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/27/2022 4:13:00 PM

Hi Paghunda, this is an exceptional write. To find and hold love is the greatest gift of all. Your words inspire the heart to take flight. Such strong images displayed. The emotion is deep. Have a wonderful evening ..... Mike.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/31/2022 4:16:00 AM

Thank you for gracing my poem with the power of your rich poetic presence. The rapture in my heart is priceless. such is the bliss you bestow.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/27/2022 12:52:00 PM

Nothing compares to finding your soulmate, everything else pales in comparison. Best of luck Paghunda. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/31/2022 4:18:00 AM

Thanks