Paghunda Zahid Poet Couplet

Just Your Face

Futile is the sun to a heart in awe
And trivial is the moon's cosmic fame

All these voices are nothing but noises 
These Flowers are like invisible stars

For what's it that the universe contains 
Nothing... but your face to keep me sane 

Only your voice brings exceptional joy
Only your lovely smile can make me fly





Syllable count: 10 per line
27th July, 2020

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Gail Debole August 2, 2025 at 2:17 PM Lovely tribute to a loved one. Stated in a uniquely creative way.

Michael Kalavik January 31, 2023 at 7:11 PM The initial couplet is perfect! It should be carved in stone for the ages. The rest seems a bit vague and untidy to my mind, but might be fashioned into a masterpiece given proper love and attention. But that's just like my opinion, dude. Be well! Paghunda Zahid February 18, 2024 at 9:26 AM I highly appreciate your opinion dear Michael. Thank you for the wonderful remarks.

Harry Horsman August 21, 2022 at 7:51 PM Oh POTW, and deserved, just love this journey you take me on. Paghunda Zahid October 21, 2022 at 11:33 AM My pleasure Harry

Susan Lawrence August 6, 2022 at 6:00 PM I adore this beautiful expression of love Paghunda ! So lovely in every way . A fav for me. Big congratulations on POTW! Hugs to you and all good wishes, Susan :) Paghunda Zahid August 19, 2022 at 10:05 AM I'm glad you liked it. I'm honoured and delighted. . Thank you

Len Gasun August 6, 2022 at 7:37 AM So glad to come back here and found this excellent write my dear friend Paghunda. I like this precious gem of yours a lot. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTW honor! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs Paghunda Zahid August 19, 2022 at 10:08 AM I relish your thoughts and I'm pleased to know that you enjoyed this poem. Thank you

Beryl Edmonds August 5, 2022 at 3:44 PM Congratulations on poem of the week Paghunda, lovely couplets… Belle Paghunda Zahid August 19, 2022 at 10:08 AM Thanks Belle

Connie Marcum Wong August 5, 2022 at 2:26 PM The sentiment expressed in this beautiful poem warms the heart Paghunda. Congratulations on your deserving POTW honor. This gem is going into my Faves! Blessings xxoo Paghunda Zahid August 19, 2022 at 10:09 AM I am so pleased to know that you liked my poem.. Thank you for your precious words, they mean a lot coming from a grand poetess of your finesse. I'm truly honoured. Thank you

Paulette Calasibetta August 3, 2022 at 6:48 PM Paghunda, congratulations on your Poem of the Week! Your sentiment is filled with pure JOY! Lovely write. :)Paulette Paghunda Zahid August 19, 2022 at 10:10 AM Thanks a lot

Susan Ashley August 2, 2022 at 8:24 AM Dear Paghunda, I am so delighted to return to this exquisite poem and offer my heartiest congratulations for receiving POTW honors. A worthy and well deserved choice. Your poem is gem, enjoy the accolades! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan Paghunda Zahid August 3, 2022 at 2:29 AM Dear Susan, Your gracious visit and heartwarming congrats are received with immense gratitude. The rapture in my heart is priceless. I am truly delighted by your return, and your endearing remarks. Thank you

Karen Jones August 1, 2022 at 4:12 PM What a lovely potw! Congrats Paghunda Zahid August 3, 2022 at 2:24 AM Thanks

Bill Baker August 1, 2022 at 9:41 AM Congratulations on your POTW, Paghunda We all need something or someone to hold onto, my friend. Thanks for sharing your inspirational source. Bill Paghunda Zahid August 2, 2022 at 6:47 AM Humbled..!! I relish your sweet remarks. Your wonderful presence is a delight to behold Bill Baker.

John Watt August 1, 2022 at 7:53 AM Nice contrasts between the things that don't satisfy and the one thing that does. "Only your lovely smile can make me fly" is such a beautiful line. Congratulations on your POTW acknowledgment ~ John Paghunda Zahid August 1, 2022 at 9:55 PM I am enchanted by the blissful spell your uplifting presence casts upon me as I revel in your thoughts.. Thank you John

I Am Anaya July 31, 2022 at 7:23 PM Congratulations on POTW! I am drawn to your poem Paghunda. At times the only thing that could keep me going was the same as you described in couplets three and four! You'll be just fine, keep writing! ;) Paghunda Zahid August 1, 2022 at 9:55 PM Indeed... My pleasure

Brandy Nicole July 31, 2022 at 6:04 PM "Flowers are like invisible stars". Such a beautiful image. Your thoughts are soft, tender and romantic. Congratulations Paghunda, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Brandy Paghunda Zahid August 1, 2022 at 9:58 PM Thank you for sharing your precious thoughts with me, I hold your endearing words in my deepest appreciation... Blessings

Constance La France July 31, 2022 at 4:38 PM Paghunda, lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor, blessings ~Constance Paghunda Zahid August 1, 2022 at 9:59 PM POTW really made me happy... Thank you

Paula Goldsmith July 31, 2022 at 8:41 AM Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed your write. Have a blessed day/week................. Paghunda Zahid July 31, 2022 at 11:13 AM Thank you

Paulette Calasibetta July 31, 2022 at 8:13 AM Congratulations on your POTW! You have crafted a delightful poem that renders the joy of life. Kudos! :)Paulette Paghunda Zahid July 31, 2022 at 11:16 AM Your words are held in gratitude. Blessings

Vijay Pandit July 31, 2022 at 6:17 AM BIG congrats on POTW! So well penned, especially the two ending lines. Enjoy your day and the week. Paghunda Zahid July 31, 2022 at 11:17 AM Thank you

David Kavanagh July 31, 2022 at 4:04 AM Congratulations Paghunda, on your joyful POTW, you appear to have captured that X-factor, that enhances and makes our lives worthwhile, excellent penning, cheers David Paghunda Zahid July 31, 2022 at 11:17 AM Indeed.. Can't agree more

Tania Kitchin July 31, 2022 at 3:54 AM Paula, a well done, heartfelt poem, congratulations on POTW! Paghunda Zahid July 31, 2022 at 11:59 AM Means a lot. Thank you

Tom Cunningham July 31, 2022 at 1:23 AM Back with congratulations Paghunda on the honour of POTW. Enjoy your day. Tom Paghunda Zahid July 31, 2022 at 1:54 AM Oh really... That's a good news.... Thank you

Robert Gorelick July 30, 2022 at 12:01 PM A love brightly burning often leaves all else shrouded in obscurity, at least for a while. Lovely, Robert Paghunda Zahid July 31, 2022 at 4:13 AM Thank you

Timothy Ray July 29, 2022 at 12:03 PM well done....a great capture of Love....take a gracious bow, well deserved Paghunda Zahid July 31, 2022 at 1:54 AM Thanks Timothy

Panagiota Romios July 27, 2022 at 5:37 PM A lovely write! My fav line …which is so beautiful: “These flowers are like invisible stars” An amazing expression ! Thank you. Pangiota xxx Paghunda Zahid July 31, 2022 at 4:16 AM Thank you

Vladislav Raven July 27, 2022 at 4:13 PM Hi Paghunda, this is an exceptional write. To find and hold love is the greatest gift of all. Your words inspire the heart to take flight. Such strong images displayed. The emotion is deep. Have a wonderful evening ..... Mike. Paghunda Zahid July 31, 2022 at 4:16 AM Thank you for gracing my poem with the power of your rich poetic presence. The rapture in my heart is priceless. such is the bliss you bestow.

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