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Just Twenty More Years

Eighty-one years old and still going strong Like I'll live forever, now I know that's wrong Just twenty more years Would allay all my fears Hope P-Soup will remember me after I'm gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/3/2017 2:37:00 PM
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Who could forget that face, It's anything but commonplace, twenty more years, have no fear, you've earned a little grace:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/4/2017 9:16:00 AM
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I couldn't resist, Jack:) You have a lovely face:)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/4/2017 8:30:00 AM
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"Who could forget that face" LOL!!!!
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Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 1/3/2017 10:40:00 AM
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We'll grant you twenty-one//as long as you're having fun//You silly quack//you'll be back//in our hearts at a hundred and one! SQUAWK ON JACKSON!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/3/2017 1:44:00 PM
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Still having fun... so I'm good for quite a few years yet, my good good friend! I'M A-SQUAWKING!!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/3/2017 9:50:00 AM
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Don't you fret don't you pout...we'd remember without a doubt...your silly face...and funky base...laughing through eternity with mere a shout
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/3/2017 10:08:00 AM
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LOL Eternity is v-e-r-y ;ong time!!! Happy New Year, Mr. Tim!!!

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