Just To Be Near You

I made my home in your homeland
to watch your daisies as they sway,
to feel their petals in my hand,
as I pick some for you everyday
to rest in sunlight where you lay.
This old, stone house was once a church.
Between the graves and lines of birch
trees in the yard, I weave my time,
and from the towers highest perch,
you sing though bells no longer chime.

And with you near, I find my breath.
The air flows as the rivers flow.
I hold no fear of life nor death.
My heart grows as the daisies grow
where souls dance in the sweet meadow.
Beyond the hills, I’m not alone.
I rest my hands upon the stone
and touch your name so finely etched
to feel the grooves lovingly known
below the birch with limbs outstretched.


Written 5/15/20 
for Dear Heart’s Dizain Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/15/2020 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I feel like I am there. Enjoy your win and day............
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 5:27:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 5/22/2020 7:35:00 AM
Rhonda, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/22/2020 8:47:00 AM
Thank you for the inspiration, Constance! I'm honored to place in your contest. Have a blessed weekend, xx Rhonda
Date: 5/19/2020 11:44:00 PM
Coming back to congratulate you on your win Rhonda :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/22/2020 12:30:00 AM
Thank you for the return visit, Aditi...I am grateful for your encouragement! xx Rhonda
Date: 5/19/2020 10:14:00 PM
I am so glad to see this gem on the winner's list, many congratulations, Rhonda!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/22/2020 12:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Michelle! xx Rhonda
Date: 5/19/2020 12:15:00 PM
Rhonda, I am so happy to see this wonderful poem in first place! It is truly deserving of the honor. Congratulations my friend! xxoo
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/22/2020 12:27:00 AM
You're so kind, Conne! Thanks again for the help. I'm sure it made a BIG difference:) xx Rhonda
Date: 5/19/2020 9:24:00 AM
It's been awhile since I have been on PS, so long that I forgot my password!! But your comments inspired me to logon and read your poems -- delightful! This one was pure joy. I have often walked among the stones -- names, dates, words, even pictures --with the wind singing through the leaves, lost in memories past! Your line "Beyond the hill, I'm not alone" jolted my heart with pure adrenaline!! We are not alone!! All the best my dear!! Love Generously!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/22/2020 12:25:00 AM
I am so happy that I inspired you to return. Maybe we'll be seeing a new post from you soon. I'll keep my eye out but no pressure! I'm grateful for your visit and kind words. You have such a positive energy...it's meant to be shared. Yes, we are NOT alone! Blessings, xx Rhonda
Date: 5/18/2020 4:59:00 AM
Rhonda, This Dizain is so beautifully composed. I am certain it will be a top winner, but your fourth line only has seven syllables, and according to Dear Heart's instructions each line must have 8 to 10 syllables. I hope you have time to add a syllable. Blessings Connie
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/18/2020 7:14:00 AM
Thank you, Connie...you are AWESOME! Some syllable counters have every as 3 syllables and some as 2, but I changed it to be safe :)
Date: 5/17/2020 9:57:00 PM
This is beautifully written Rhonda, you are on a roll lately, Constance is sure to love this one!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/18/2020 7:04:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 5/15/2020 9:48:00 PM
This is really soothing Rhonda. Good luck for the contest :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/18/2020 7:03:00 AM
Thank you, Aditi!
Date: 5/15/2020 8:23:00 PM
Hi, Rhonda, this is so moving and graceful, and peaceful, I especially like the closing lines!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/15/2020 9:02:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 5/15/2020 7:06:00 PM
I love the beauty of flow and loved to feel your poem grow...
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/15/2020 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanne!
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