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. . like a paragraph

placed on a particular page,

( all the other sentences separate )

already aware -

that this is ‘ just the beginning ‘

of clever clusters,

a blended balance

and,

a collection

of poetic phrases

captured

- in my next chapter

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beauty- being in the eyes of the beholder

~ a simple scribble ~

my muse welcomes the new year

just the beginning



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 . . like a paragraph 
    placed on a particular page,
( all the other sentences separate )
          already aware -

that this is ‘ just the beginning ‘
          of clever clusters,       
          a blended balance 
                     and,
                a collection
           of poetic phrases
          
                  captured
       -   in my next chapter 
                 

    ------------------------------------------
beauty- being in the eyes of the beholder

            ~ a simple scribble ~ 
     my muse welcomes the new year

journeysimplewordsalliteration

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/31/2024 7:38:00 AM

Very sensual, awesome use of alliteration and style. I enjoyed reading this one today. Sara K

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/2/2024 5:48:00 PM

Some soft thoughts linger within, with a small sample of sensuality. Thank you, Sara. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Edward Wraith

Date: 5/22/2024 7:44:00 PM

May you find your passions, pleasures and inspirations to fill your next chapters.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/28/2024 10:02:00 AM

Thank you, Edward. Each chapter holds a different story, and I'm looking forward to those beautiful moments within. :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/25/2024 2:19:00 AM

Unique and captivating, Brandy:)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/25/2024 7:37:00 PM

Joanna, I appreciate the compliment and the lovely comment. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Valsa George

Date: 3/12/2024 8:36:00 PM

The way you align your lines on a page itself is so capturing. Thus you have set the stage for a series of creative writing in 2024. We are looking for that 'clever clusters'. Your poetry is of a unique kind in format and content. All the Best dear Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/13/2024 7:10:00 PM

Dear Valsa, you always bring a smile to my heart with all your kind words and compliments. So sweet of you to say my writing is captivating and creative, while being unique, all at the same time. I enjoy using a different format as you've noticed. It seems to be my signature style. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/11/2024 10:51:00 AM

Great communicative write; to sight Brandy.' Sweet content, that highlits your intent Within smooth lines,i rejoice to find!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/13/2024 6:43:00 PM

Thank you Joe, for saying my writing is smooth and sweet. Your kind words are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Ink Empress

Date: 3/7/2024 3:16:00 AM

Dear brandy, how beautiful is your wordplay here and the flow of your lines here truly is catchy and captivating! Love the font and presentation too, truly gorgeous and well delivered I especially love the opening lines “clever clusters” “ blended balance” exquisite alliterations! Pleasure reading your work today. Sending you light always

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/8/2024 8:04:00 PM

Dear Ink, you always speak from the heart and in such a beautiful, poetic way. Thank you for sharing what lines you love the most. Blended balance can be found in Pages of Poetry. Most definitely. You and your thoughts are appreciated, my dear friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/5/2024 3:29:00 AM

The imagery is stunning here and the a above message of separation, wise , hope your keeping well, sending you a smile today !

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/5/2024 6:45:00 PM

Dear Vienna, thank you for saying the imagery is stunning and sentences that separate is wise. Your smile is felt. :) I'm doing well, my sweet friend. (Your kindness doesn't go unnoticed). Many wonderful blessings to you. I'm sending a smile your way. :) Hugs, Brandy

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 3/4/2024 5:03:00 AM

Love this awesome poem . blessings

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/5/2024 6:21:00 PM

Thank you, Yolanda. Your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2024 10:15:00 AM

very cool writing, Brandy. Keep it up!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/29/2024 2:43:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Your kind words of encouragement are appreciated. My best to you, always. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jude Herrick

Date: 2/24/2024 7:14:00 AM

Brandy, I use the above as a technicality to excuse my poetry. But it does remain true doesn't it. That the beauty of poetry is that even little things are an insight, the next chapter holding promise and promising to behold a unique vantage point. The clever clusters a recipe and stylized signature, each poet truly one of a kind.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/25/2024 7:09:00 PM

Jude, your statement about each poet being one of a kind holds so much truth. With that being said, your poetry is ' truly one of a kind. ' The way you express moments and emotions is extraordinary ! I appreciate all your kind words and compliments about me and my poetry. My heart is smiling. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Brandy

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/23/2024 5:46:00 PM

Dearest Brandy, soulful poetess, your expressive verse impresses my imagination in wonderful ways. The delicate optimism of your poem hints at an anticipation of wondrous imaginings, tender entanglements and pulses shaken and stirred. Your brilliant poetic artistry always leave me awe, my sweet friend. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/24/2024 8:02:00 PM

Dearest Susan, my heart is smiling with you noticing the ' optimism ' within this simple scribble of mine. My personality shines, indeed. Your ability to a create a flawless masterpiece is beyond amazing to me. You truly are an artist, my dear sweet friend. I treasure your compliments, more than words can express. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Bill Baker

Date: 2/19/2024 10:09:00 PM

A lovely start to the new year, my sweet friend, Brandy. I'm looking forward to more of your poetry in 2024. (I can't believe I missed this one) Hugs, Bill

Bill Baker
Date: 2/21/2024 9:20:00 PM

Thank you for noticing my new avatar is Sara and me. :-) I thought I try a new one for a while. Hugs, Bill

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/21/2024 6:49:00 PM

I was thinking the same thing. :) A new chapter in the new year. No need to apologize, my sweet friend. Life keeps us busy. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. * Nice picture of you and Sara in your avatar. * Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/17/2024 12:49:00 PM

WOW!!! What a lovely/wonderful write with a pretty picture. I wish you would write mote. Please!!! Have a wonderful day/week to come...............

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/17/2024 3:54:00 PM

Dear Paula, thank you for the lovely comment and compliment. It is a pretty picture. As time and life allows, I plan to post more of my poetic whispers. I hope your evening is nice. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/9/2024 8:09:00 PM

Shaping the new year with your scribbles is a thing of beauty, Brandi.... "Beauty- being in the eyes of the beholder" indeed ;D

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/10/2024 4:55:00 PM

Dear Anaya, such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry. You and your kind words are greatly appreciated. Your beauty shines, my dear friend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/2/2024 4:13:00 PM

Brandi, Your poem is a captivating journey, a portal to a realm where words dance and emotions intertwine. It feels like turning a page in a cherished book, eager for what's next. Your mastery of language and imagery creates a poetic exploration. Each line, a brushstroke of brilliance, leads us deeper into the regions of your thoughts. Your muse, a guiding light, beckons us into the new year with open arms. The magic of simple scribbles. - Blessings, Daniel

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/5/2024 8:19:00 PM

Daniel, you place me and my poetry on a pedestal. So much higher than I deserve. I'm humbled by all your kind words and compliments. When moments move in a magical way, my muse enjoys tangling, arranging and then rearranging; the whisper of words. Continue on this journey with me, because each chapter will be beautiful and tender. So sweet of you to say ' my muse is a guiding light. ' I'm smiling and blushing, all at the same time. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/2/2024 4:39:00 AM

Brandy, the uniqueness and beauty with which you write is always a great pleasure to read! Your words fill the heart! I am so pleased that your muse is forward thinking and poised to inspire the new year! Happy Friday xxoo

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/4/2024 6:43:00 PM

Mike, you leave me in awe, saying my poetry is ' unique and a pleasure to read. ' My heart is smiling. :) It seems my muse enjoys floating in the clouds, so whenever she decides to grace me with her presence; words will caress the page. Happy Sunday to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 1/31/2024 9:13:00 AM

A lovely write, Brandy. Your next chapter will be as wonderful as your last. Your beautiful writing and wonderful heart...Hugs Charlie

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/31/2024 6:57:00 PM

Such a wonderful thing to say. :) Your confidence leaves me in complete awe. Thank you Charles, for all your kind words and compliments. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus

Date: 1/30/2024 5:25:00 AM

You whet our appetite with candy-wrapped promises which I have no doubt will be delivered in due time, Brandy. In the meantime, I'll sit and wait..... Warm regards & hugs, my friend. // paul

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/31/2024 6:21:00 PM

* candy-wrapped promises * You know I'm blushing with this thought. So ' sweet ' of you to say you'll "sit and wait," until my next offering. :) Yes, when the time is right, it'll happen. Thank you Paul, for your lovely comment. My heart is smiling. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/26/2024 5:36:00 AM

Your poetry always sends shivers down my spine. Loved your poem.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/27/2024 7:29:00 PM

I'm in complete awe, knowing that my poetry creates that feeling. Thank you, Victor. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/25/2024 9:51:00 AM

Enjoyable write!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/26/2024 8:11:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 1/22/2024 5:41:00 PM

I am definitely ready for your next chapter of perfectly balanced poetic phrases that will take us on a magical trip through the heavens. Your simple romantic scribbles have a way of doing just that. Warm hugs, John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/24/2024 6:15:00 PM

Smiling at you, John. :) As the saying goes, good things come to those who wait. I'm still waiting for those balanced words to find me again, and I know they will, when the time is right. Your comment is so beautiful and tender. Thank you my sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paige Hind

Date: 1/21/2024 5:05:00 PM

Simply gorgeous, Brandy. I loved the ending; how unique. You truly are a special writer. <3

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/24/2024 11:38:00 AM

Awe, thank you Paige. You humble me, when you say I'm a special writer. I'm just a simple woman that embraces emotions, and then shares them. Thank you for saying the ending is unique. :) I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 1/21/2024 6:10:00 AM

Blending in words to make poetry, Lovely write Brandy, hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/23/2024 8:02:00 PM

. . . . And that's exactly how it happens. :) So wonderful indeed, when words paint a poetic picture. Thank you, Joseph. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/20/2024 7:13:00 AM

--already aware -that this is ‘ just the beginning ‘ of clever clusters-- a blended balance --Fabulous description, my friend. Delicate and emotive--your scribbles are wonderful poems to read, always! Next chapter awaits, Brandy!!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/20/2024 4:36:00 PM

Seems fitting, this being the beginning of the a new year. A new chapter, does await, and I'm looking forward to placing each and every phrase. Thank you, Vijay. Your thoughts always bring a smile. Such a sweet thing to say. :) Hugs, Brandy