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Just Sometimes

sometimes i close my eyes just to feel you near pretending these tears are your fingers tracing my face as you pull me in tenderly brushing your lips against mine suddenly i don't feel so alone

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Pax Geist

Date: 11/14/2019 8:22:00 PM

Lovely, sensuous, a yearning yet true heart... speaking.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 8:52:00 PM

what a kind thing to say... thank you so much :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/14/2019 10:04:00 AM

A sense of loneliness and yet longing - creative, romantic sensations which produce another gem from your pen dear friend! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 11:50:00 AM

Thank you so much...glad you could feel the emotion of the piece :) blessings and hugs :)

Hello There

Date: 11/13/2019 9:05:00 PM

ah, sweet sensation! tenderly crafted and tastefully seasoned with equal parts sorrow, longing, passion, pleasure and peace of mind... <3 a beauty, Sandra!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 4:58:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend ... hugs :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/13/2019 8:18:00 PM

Magic! ~ gw

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 8:24:00 PM

thank you :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 11/13/2019 7:00:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful, once again, the longing and desire in your poem reaches out and touches me softly. Your talent for expressing your feelings poetically always amazes me.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/13/2019 11:16:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend, what a sweet thing to say...i guess if there is one thing i can pen it's painful emotions... we all have our own style i suppose... your comment made me smile :) hugs