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Just Outside Your Window

Just outside your window An early sun is rising, the sky a crystal blue With quiet breezes flowing a crisp November view A blue bird at my window, so happily it sings Chrysanthemums are blooming in all that nature brings The autumn leaves are falling, in colors on the lawn When just outside your windows, you’ll find a wondrous dawn So here at my computer, my coffee in its cup I bid you all good morning, it’s time to now wake up Good morning Soupers

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Lifes' Tapestry

Date: 11/18/2018 2:45:00 PM

Good morning indeed!

Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2018 7:44:00 AM

Good morning my friend. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/7/2018 8:21:00 PM

I second Brenda's emotions (drop down). She's absolutely right. This poem and so many like it are just bejeweled gems. They're fresh as the Spring dew and bracing as a cool, crisp Autumn morn. Marvelous! ~ Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 11/8/2018 8:00:00 AM

Thanks so much again GW. I am happy that you liked this one. I just try to start everyone's day with a smile here on soup. Sometimes it works and sometimes...not so much. :)

Wendy Watson

Date: 11/7/2018 4:39:00 PM

Oh,I'm only just reading this and it's bedtime here in England but I shall dwell on the joyful words as I meet the new morn!( but I can't promise dawn!)

Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2018 4:43:00 PM

I understand, dawn does come very early in the morning. :) Thank you so much Wendy for your kindness.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/7/2018 4:15:00 PM

a lovely way to greet the morning! i wish i'd seen this earlier, chris...

Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2018 4:22:00 PM

Thank you so much Ilene. Better late than never. :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/7/2018 3:26:00 PM

Just outside my window all I see is stars and moon,but I'll dream about your dawning autumn all night and afternoon : ) .A very sweet poem Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2018 3:55:00 PM

Hi there Charmaine. Thank you so much for your sweet words. Sleep well my friend and have wonderful dreams.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/7/2018 2:39:00 PM

A beautifully cheerful poem. Well done, Chris. Charming!

Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2018 2:43:00 PM

Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/7/2018 10:20:00 AM

Not much blue sky here but grey clouds, wind and lots of rain. Bringing the leaves down though. Ready to.be raked up on a dry day Depressing November day for sure but soup helps to brighten the day.

Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2018 11:22:00 AM

Well, I hope this helps a little Tom. And for those leaves, get a lawn mower with a bag on it, that's what I do. Raking is too much work for me. :) Thanks so much.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/7/2018 10:08:00 AM

I see birds are at your window too :) You have described the day we are having here perfectly. The sun has returned today and it as if I am looking out my window reading this. Well done Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2018 11:20:00 AM

That sounds like a beautiful morning Heidi. I'll let you in on a little secret, mine was written from memory, it is cloudy and dreary here today....don't tell anyone though. : )

Lin Lane

Date: 11/7/2018 9:16:00 AM

If I hadn't already risen, your greeting would've roused me. Sweetly composed, Chris.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/7/2018 11:00:00 AM

You're welcome, Chris. It takes no effort to be kind to one who shows kindness to others.

Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2018 9:24:00 AM

Thanks so much Lin. I wasn't feeling very poetic this morning so I forced this one out. I am not that happy with it but I am happy that you enjoyed it so much. Thank you for always being so very kind to me.