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Just One More Day

Just One More Day Just one more day, now, for you see, I was scarcely four years when you suddenly left me. One more day back then, or even one week Would mean very little since my memory's weak. I barely remember that morning I saw Mommy dragging your body down our long hall. And everyone crying and expecting me to, But how could I really! I didn't know you! I was the girl whose daddy had died. But when I cried tears, with each drop I lied. Just one more day, with both of us grown. So I could discover whence my seed was sown. Just one more day, to dance my first dance To teach me to drive, to preach of romance. Please one more day to show you I've tried To become a grown woman that might give a dad pride. Mom tried her best, but I long to know you Just one more day, daddy, please, for us two. My daughters have had the best father on earth But I wonder if I did at the time of my birth. Just one more day, daddy, I can't wait to meet The man who gave me this smile, these feet. You've rested in heaven for 50 years now Share just one day, you can do It somehow. That this girl's heart still breaks is alarming But she'll wait just one more day to meet her Prince Charming. And if one more day takes longer than thought, We'll still get the time for which I have fought. Because when my time comes to part from this place, I look forward to once again seeing your face. Just one more day in the blink of an eye My daddy and me, at the Ball in the sky. 12/6/2015

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Date: 8/21/2017 9:01:00 AM
So vibrantly heartfelt. Love your poem. The pain is so real. Fifty years is a long time - You probably know he's close on the other side watching proudly and waiting.
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Date: 12/16/2015 12:33:00 AM
Hi CINDI, congrats on your fine win. SKAT
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Date: 12/14/2015 8:11:00 AM
Very good write Cindi, very touching.
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Date: 12/14/2015 12:08:00 AM
Cindi, beautiful, congratulations
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Date: 12/13/2015 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You expressed this well.
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 12/13/2015 5:14:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 12/13/2015 3:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win Cindi I had a huge lump in my throat reading this poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 12/13/2015 4:37:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/13/2015 3:20:00 PM
Cindi...congrats on your win and many thanks for being a part of my contest *smiles* -luloo
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 12/13/2015 4:37:00 PM
Thank you for sponsoring the contest and inspiring me!

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