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Just Looking

Stopped at a mall on our way to the shore Standing in an aisle in the men’s department A woman approached, and asked May I help you, sir I replied, no thank you, just looking When we arrived at the shore I could feel it The longing for those times long past A sailor, a pirate, A dreamer, a rogue To sail again beyond the horizon The sand of foreign shores between my toes Harbor lights and a local pub, rowdy crowd Scent of a dark-eyed woman, soft lips Key Largo playing in the background Outside the surf paying its own song Standing there along the shore With eyes closed tightly, I was just looking.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/25/2009 4:57:00 PM
LOOKING IS A GREAT THING IT KEEPS US SAFE ITS A LEGAL THING I THIS WORLD OF RULES EVEN IN MARRIAGES ITS OK TO LOOK WELL IT SHOULD BE YOU ARE A WISE MAN AND I LOV EHOW YOU LOOK AT LIFE WE THINK ALIKE THATS GREAT COMING FROM TWO DIFFERENT WORLDS
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Date: 5/16/2009 10:27:00 PM
Lovely poem Vince, James
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Date: 5/6/2009 4:01:00 PM
nice one Vince, also thanks for your comments. - Freedom
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Date: 5/3/2009 8:14:00 PM
how do i kno my poem got featured lol i just started puttin poems on here on easter : )
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:39:00 PM
This poem brings back many memories of the dreams I had in younger days. Sometimes, like you, I feel that I am "just looking" and not participating in life's joys today. You surely took me back to finer times, Vince. Excellent writing. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/22/2009 1:35:00 PM
Beautiful poem.
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Date: 4/22/2009 9:08:00 AM
mmm ... play one for me ... Vince, outstanding, and powerful ... what nobility of passion and longing you tell with the genius of you pen, may you be ever blessed, noble poet.
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Date: 4/22/2009 12:32:00 AM
A great angle to write from, I love people watching, it can bring such amusement and muse... Remembering on the other hand is different for we then see from another angle our life that passed before us at some other time, and that I think comes forth from this write more so... Kindest thhoughts and thanks for all your welcome comments, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/21/2009 10:40:00 AM
A great reminicent poem of days past. sad but, you will always have those special memories, Well done here!
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Date: 4/21/2009 6:51:00 AM
Through your beautiful poetry ...you are all these my friend! Hugs, Robin
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Date: 4/21/2009 5:55:00 AM
Shades of Bertie Higgins! 'Key Largo' is one of my favourite songs... BRAVO my friend!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/15/2009 3:46:00 PM
You are still that same sailor, pirate, dreamer and rogue. Someone here believes time past present and future is all one. Don't you feel it? It is all a part of your forever and one day, you will know. May sound crazy, but 'there are more things in heaven and earth...' so, I honestly don't feel its over. I could be wrong, but that's my opinion. I feel the bittersweet here. Love, shar
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Date: 4/15/2009 8:10:00 AM
Love the comparisons in this clever, enjoyable poem. We all tend to have our moments of "just looking" ..... some dreams don't have to end, it never hurts to look!
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Date: 4/15/2009 7:37:00 AM
No matter how old we get our memories always stay young and make us feel that way if only for a few moments, Vince your poetry is always a pleasure to read and I say that in all sincerity, God Bless. Ron
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