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Just Give a Smile

Waiting so long for your sweet glance will you look at me just for once? That is enough to make me dance! Just like monsoon sky is your mind sudden black clouds amid sunshine, cause of rainfall I just can't find. Now please look up and give a smile bring back sunshine just for a while don't let go this evening futile. © kashinath karmakar(13th August 2011) ==============000=============== Placement:HM ;(August 2011) By:kashinath karmakar Contest:Triplet Sponsor:Dr Ram Mehta

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2011 9:10:00 AM

Congrats on your win in Dr. Ram's contest.Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 8/16/2011 1:55:00 PM

Many congrats on all your wins, Kash : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2011 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Triplet" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/16/2011 4:58:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful, Kash, and I see you placed in Dr. Ram's contest with this lovely triplet. If I go a day without seeing a smile, it is indeed a futile one. I love your upbeat perspective on life! (Hope you'll try my new contest too. Can't even post a blog to announce it due to Soup technical problems. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2011 12:07:00 AM

hi, Kash, I can see down here that you got an HM. But I really thought you would get in top ten. It's a tender sweet poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2011 11:40:00 PM

Congrats Kash on your HM with these wonderful words using new form luv..enjoy honor my friend...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2011 9:38:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in my contest, kashinath

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/15/2011 3:55:00 PM

still greeeat, akshi... got more?? :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2011 10:16:00 PM

Yours is one of the best of the triplets I am seeing, KAsh. REAlly well done, my friend.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/14/2011 6:54:00 PM

Needed to get my fix today and your verse never disappoints. Lightly romantic with such innocense my friend. Hugs to you!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/14/2011 1:49:00 PM

Well this sure is a sweet write, Kashinath! I think anybody reading this would smile ;) I really like that second stanza of yours! Wish you the best in the contest! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2011 6:26:00 AM

A great poem Kash, hope it is not a pointless evening as well... thanks for sharing,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/13/2011 9:30:00 PM

very pretty picture of romance in full bloom Kash.. good luck in the contest.. a stunner luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/13/2011 5:45:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, kashinath

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/13/2011 3:02:00 PM

this is sooo sweet and inviting... great job, kashi... wnning wishes! :) nette