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Just Down the Road

If I keep myself alerted as I'm leaving my abode, I'll see life and death and drama happening just down the road. I saw an eagle, hawk and heron as I drove to town today. Each sat in calm aloofness with a watchful eye for prey. I'm glad I'm not a bunny, a small bird or a mouse, for with such predators about I'd dare not leave my house. If I were a frog or fish I would sit still with eyes closed tight, knowing that big hungry heron could devour me with one bite. My Lord gave me dominion over land and beast and fowl and made me big enough I can't be picked off by an owl. I find living to be tolerable, quite peaceful and serene, but many smaller beings know that nature can be mean. So next time I feel like crying and grumbling at my fate, I'll remember smaller creatures that would think my life is great. "Survival of the fittest"is the rule by which they live. Dying is the price of living. They accept it and forgive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/2/2014 12:24:00 AM
I really liked this one! I read some of your work here and I like them all. You are a great writer!
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Date: 5/23/2014 10:08:00 PM
Big congrats on a fine win my friend!!!!
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Date: 5/23/2014 9:22:00 PM
Joyce, a wonderful won...SKAT
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Date: 5/20/2014 1:10:00 AM
It's a nice take on the theme of the contest. Congrats on the win, Joyce
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Date: 5/19/2014 3:55:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Joyce...
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Date: 5/19/2014 9:14:00 AM
so warmly and beautifully done., joyce.. big cheers on your win.. huggs
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Date: 5/18/2014 8:18:00 PM
Sometimes, we forget how good we have it, as human beings!.... Your poem has good humor, great rhyme, and a nice flow to it, Joyce. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/18/2014 11:22:00 AM
A truly amazing write my friend.. I found in thought provoking as well as very delightful. Bravo and bravo!!
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Date: 5/16/2014 6:13:00 AM
If we think about it, it can be a sad thing for one to give its life so that another can live..In the human's life, sometimes one person gives up their identity so that another can be great or they give up their idenity and another's failures are great..Enjoyed reading your work today..Great topic that you have chosen about which to write..I am glad that I chose it to read..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara
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Date: 5/12/2014 8:40:00 AM
Just down the road or the world's other half. No matter what, it's nice to laugh. For man and beast both have their fears. It's been that way for years and years. Hello Joyce. Have a great day.
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Date: 5/7/2014 10:55:00 AM
What ever your position in the social or ecological circles you will always be higher that some and lower than others. Lets all be grateful for what we have
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Date: 5/5/2014 3:48:00 PM
wonderful poem and it leaves a lot to think about the smaller ones,,enjoyed very much Joyce
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Date: 5/5/2014 10:36:00 AM
love this thoughtful write, Joyce - yes, so good to be human!! Hope you're having a great week xxx
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Date: 5/3/2014 10:31:00 PM
Joyce this is wonderful...Sometimes I wish man would adhere to the "survival of the fittest" motto...hugs Tim
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Date: 5/3/2014 8:13:00 PM
I do like your Just Down the Road Joyce. Very well done to the joy of life. Your longevity has proven that your advice is worth heeding. Love and Hugs Verlena...
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