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Just Below Your Lips

Just below your lips
all my desires curled up now
whispering love talks
to a single beauty spot
tonight my world starts from there





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Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/15/2013 8:27:00 AM

Kash congrats on you wonderful Tanka. It defiantly deserved a win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2013 10:26:00 PM

Hola, Kash, congrats on your win. stopping by to say good night. LOVE *LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2013 10:09:00 PM

Hi Kash, Congratulations, with your awesome winning poem. ;-) Enjoy my latest blog if you like. Always loving and enjoying the soup ~ SKAT ~

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/9/2013 2:06:00 PM

Im rereading this gem till you write something new..Its a most beautiful romantic sentimental enchanting poem ..once again im mesmerized..I can read it in forever.

John Posey

Date: 7/7/2013 6:01:00 PM

Kash, I like the Tanka form.....You have endeared it even more to me. Great write my friend... Jake

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/4/2013 8:44:00 AM

Wow Kash - I think I said this before...Charma is the queen of romance on the Soup and you are DEFINITELY the king...

Bidhu Patnaik

Date: 7/1/2013 2:22:00 AM

Extremely romantic and tempting. The expressions are remarkable and so true for a lover..I am mesmerized at the presentation of these lines..Bidhu

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/29/2013 4:29:00 PM

really enjoyed this lovely tanka Shadow

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 3:20:00 PM

wow! lovely, ................... thank you... fixed the entry. :-)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/25/2013 3:53:00 PM

This is very nice indeed ;}

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/25/2013 10:59:00 AM

OH MY!!! This is amazing! Very sensual!

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 6/24/2013 6:41:00 AM

:) beautiful

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/23/2013 1:39:00 PM

hapy sunday, kashi.. went to buddhist temples today..:) huggs

Adarsh Raj

Date: 6/22/2013 9:56:00 AM

Such a blower.... Awesome=)=)=): ):)

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/21/2013 4:45:00 PM

This is sexy and lush with romance!! Love it !! You are very romantic at heart!!!

Julie Heckman

Date: 6/20/2013 5:06:00 PM

Thanks Kash for the plus...this is a delightful poem!!

Judy Konos

Date: 6/20/2013 4:03:00 PM

Well Now... That's a WOW WOW

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/20/2013 2:56:00 PM

yoohoo. :) huggs

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/20/2013 1:52:00 PM

This is one of the most beautiful romantic poems i ever read..going to my favourites.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/19/2013 8:07:00 AM

back here for more of your refreshing thoughts, bud..thanks for your friendship, kashi..:) hugggs

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/19/2013 7:38:00 AM

Very romantic. Lovely words. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 6/19/2013 12:20:00 AM

great! romance.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2013 11:02:00 PM

btw, I have a tanka now but won't post it till later! gotta post for another contest that is almost closed!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/18/2013 4:50:00 PM

Interesting work that you have presented to us in this one..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the visit to my work and the consoling words on Gail's blog..Your compassion is appreciated..Sara