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Just August

These gold suffused August afternoons The luxury of this lazy light Sweetened beneath peach blossom moons Wide dawn reclaims the narrow night As the sun lifts on saffron balloons. 08/09/22 Just August contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 3/1/2023 10:29:00 PM

What a pretty poem. Your imagery is wonderful. I am an August baby and almost named my daughter August. Your third line is my absolute favorite, it is fun to read outloud. I enjoyed this so much, it is truly lovely.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/10/2022 12:25:00 PM

Incredible! Dear Michelle, the beauty of your artistry and poetic finesse lifts my heart’s imagination on saffron balloons.. and what an exquisite elation it is. I am swooning over every line. A fantastic fav!! “Wide dawn reclaims the narrow night” - wow! What a perfect metaphor! But then, every line here is :) Congratulations for your wonderful win! Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

P.S. Awtry

Date: 9/4/2022 12:00:00 PM

“peach blossom moons” ohhh so beautiful! :) ps

Bill Baker

Date: 8/24/2022 4:34:00 PM

Loved the imagery, Michelle. Good luck in the contest! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/23/2022 6:39:00 AM

"gold suffused August" - Wow! What an adjective! Beautiful. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/22/2022 1:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. Have a blessed day writing away............

Ann Peck

Date: 8/22/2022 9:41:00 AM

I love your poem, Michelle...peach blossom moons and saffron balloons. It can't get more lovely than that!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/22/2022 6:54:00 AM

Fave for me! Beautiful imagery! Congratulations, Michelle!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/21/2022 11:17:00 PM

A sense of heaven in these lines Michelle: “Wide dawn reclaims the narrow night As the sun lifts on saffron balloons.” Poetry at its best! Congratulations on your wonderful First place win. Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2022 8:52:00 PM

This is one of my favorites of my top placed. it's fabulous!! Congrats.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/22/2022 8:06:00 PM

Thank you for the placement in your contest, Andrea~

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/20/2022 4:49:00 AM

I really do enjoy and appreciate nature poems but I am not too good good at doing them. As I mentioned in my previous comment, your passion for nature always, produces gems. I love been in the bush, and to the Kruger National Park we go at the end of the month. I will certainly have a write ready to post on our return as i make my daily notes. Hugs and blessings. Kind regards, Jennifer. Blessings and hugs my friend Michelle.

John Watt

Date: 8/19/2022 10:57:00 AM

I love the phrase "gold suffused", such a perfectly pithy description of a sunny August day. Also liked the alliteration of line 2 and the imagery of the sun lifting on saffron balloons. Hope you are enduring your summer swelter, Michelle ~ John

John Watt
Date: 8/20/2022 8:55:00 PM

It's been relatively mild here with a couple heat waves to date. September is usually our hottest month... we shall see

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/19/2022 1:22:00 PM

We've had 4 heat waves over this summer (defined as two or more days in a row of over 90 degrees) and one more coming next week, but it's been mostly pleasant, how's serene San Diego doing?

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/15/2022 7:42:00 AM

this has to be a top contender! every line perfectly worded, gorgeous imagery.:)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/15/2022 7:01:00 PM

Thank you very much, Charlotte, appreciate it~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/10/2022 6:28:00 PM

The last two lines are positively exquisite in this reader's view, Michelle. An inspiring gem of a poem -- and a FAVE. Thank you, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/12/2022 2:34:00 PM

You always make me smile, gw, thanks for that and the fave!

Ann Peck

Date: 8/10/2022 3:02:00 PM

as the sun lifts on saffron balloons...so gorgeous. I'm predicting a First Place on this one! Best of luck!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/12/2022 2:33:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind comment, Ann~

Juliet Ligon

Date: 8/10/2022 7:45:00 AM

Just lovely! Beautiful descriptions, especially the saffron balloons.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/10/2022 1:11:00 PM

Thank you so much, Juliet, I appreciate it

Susan Woodrow

Date: 8/10/2022 7:20:00 AM

Loved this esp your fourth line! Yes, i feel the cold already in the mornings as the dark lingers beyond my wake up alarm :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/10/2022 1:11:00 PM

The mornings seem to come more quickly in the summer! Thank you for your comment, Susan

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/10/2022 3:28:00 AM

Love your discriptive verse about August Michelle, its our final bit of summer before autumn creeps in. Best of luck in the contest and hope you are well. Tom

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/10/2022 1:10:00 PM

For me August feels long and humid, but we've had some nice weather lately, thanks for commenting, Tom