Just Ask and It Shall Be Given.

This Club Med lagoon really holds the heat,
with a beach front view and a coral suite.
But the best of all
as we watch it fall
is how they serve up each meal on a sheet!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 7:42 PM
Congratulations, Gerard. You DONE GOOD! Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 7:04 AM
Congrats on the second place win.
Freeman Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 9:20 PM
Congratulations Gerard on your duce. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 5:12 PM
Great job. Congratulations. Joyce
Mitchell Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 1:19 PM
A great limerick! Funny too! Congrats on your win: )
Fraser Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 11:10 AM
Nice one Gerard, you had me chuckling with this little gem. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations Gerard on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "To Die For"Limericks. Love, Carol
Tideswell Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Congrats on your second place win ~ Sharon :)
Richards Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 7:07 AM
Congratulations, Gerard!!! Great fun was this one....but I will re-schedule any Club Med plans after reading yours!!! Funny!!
Taylor Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 6:42 AM
Congrats, Gerard. Good job. Ralph
Devonshire Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 4:34 AM
Awesome, Gerard. Had me rolling! Congratulations on second place. There was some great competition. Love, Carolyn
Rich Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 11:56 AM
Enjoyed this write today. Please check out my latest criminals part 3 when you have time.. ofcourse the story isn't true. Have a great day.
Mehta Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Good luck in the contest with a nice write on the picture.
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