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Just As Sweet

A single red Rose sits on the corner of the yellow linen draped table in the open air cobblestone courtyard. Under the star filled moonlit midnight sky romance sings as the piano plays. In walks you just as sweet as that single Rose your smile outshining the lustrous moon wearing that periwinkle blue dress accenting those eyes like a vane gated Tulip I take your hand and we dance we dance close to the beat of the music and the beat of our hearts upon white pure petals of the margarita saying only "love me" a single red rose sits on the corner table showing our love.....but you are more than just a Rose you are a red Camellia, the flame to my heart you are the Calla Lilly blowing in the wind so majestic and pure the cheerful Crocus and the beautiful Orchid lighting up my simple little world You're more than just a Rose having only one certain trait you're my bouquet of wildflowers all put together, you are great

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/6/2015 12:41:00 PM
a sweet array of garlands.. so pretty, tim.. hugggs
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:36:00 PM
roses, wildflowers and lily. She is everything beautiful!!
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Date: 5/5/2015 1:46:00 PM
A charming and lovely read, indeed. No wonder the tributick master was almost incoherent! Very romantic, Tim. :)
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:38:00 PM
Thank Kim....I thought he was always almost incoherent...lol
Date: 5/5/2015 1:14:00 PM
Tim, I sure hope you are saving these ones about your daughters. When they are older, these poems will be like golden treasures for them, truly an astounding poem!
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:36:00 PM
That sounds like a great idea.
Date: 5/5/2015 6:51:00 AM
Tim, your poem is lovely, so flowing and magical with all the different flowers, I love it, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, we nurses . . . not sure if it will place in the limerick contest because I think it is more sad than humour, but we nurse need to laugh at these things at times or the job is too devastating in its reality
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:34:00 PM
Thank You BW
Date: 5/4/2015 6:56:00 PM
So beautiful your poem...Your verses are definitely a bouquet of rainbow colours and scents...This poem perfumes our air..A fav!!!
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:27:00 PM
Thanks sweet one...You are much much more than a street flower...hugs Tim
Date: 5/4/2015 4:50:00 PM
Love this Tim. I was a florist for a lot of years and people never understood why I would prefer a mixed bouquet to a rose. This poem says it all. A beautiful poem for your muse!!~Jan 7
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:26:00 PM
Thanks Jan...I do love to give a bouquet as well
Date: 5/4/2015 4:29:00 PM
simply charming Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/5/2015 5:25:00 PM
Thanks Jan...My muse had me thinking.
Date: 5/4/2015 4:25:00 PM
what lovely sentiments
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/5/2015 5:24:00 PM
Thank you Mary
Date: 5/4/2015 4:22:00 PM
Pure, fresh and captivating. What an uplifting read
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:23:00 PM
Thank you lucy

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