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Just As I Imagined

Trees were dressed in gold, acorns came down like bullets Leaves fell through the air, in flurries as they landed together Oh so much to do, but just enough time to stop and notice Scene after scene, in a continual slideshow of beauty The lake was smooth with perfect reflection of the mountains Oh a colorful mirror it was, reflections to remember… Just as I imagined what once was, but still waits to begin Heidi Sands 10/16/19

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Date: 10/18/2019 8:52:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Heidi. I love your last line.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/19/2019 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. I am happy you like this :)
Date: 10/18/2019 8:27:00 AM
You imagined it perfectly into my mind. Now where did I put that sweater my grandmother knitted?
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Date: 10/18/2019 8:51:00 AM
lol. Yes, time for a sweater Richard. Thank you for your comment. Have a nice day , enjoy :)
Date: 10/18/2019 6:40:00 AM
This is so beautiful, the action of the acorns the calmness of the lake, its an active poem of great beauty, Enjoyed reading it dear Heidi . Have a wonderful day.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/18/2019 8:12:00 AM
Thank you Pixie. I appreciate your kind comment. Have a nice day! :)
Date: 10/17/2019 4:09:00 AM
- A beautiful picture, Heidi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/18/2019 8:12:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/16/2019 5:19:00 PM
A beautiful, scenic oasis you describe, Heidi..always a blessing to be in it..enjoy!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/16/2019 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay :)
Date: 10/16/2019 4:04:00 PM
Beautiful Heidi. We all need to take some time and enjoy the beauty that surrounds us. That other stuff can wait a few minutes. : )
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/16/2019 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Chris. You are right, we must, especially these days :)

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