Just a Sigh

Upon her beauty his mind would often drift But now he was just a sigh upon her lips He missed her tender kiss and sweet caress A distant memory he cherished best Brokenhearted and in a daze Missing her for for all those days But now he was just a sigh upon her lips All emotional strings were clipped With someone else she was now in love Someone else would get her sweet and tender kisses He missed her tender kiss and sweet caress But now, he was just a sigh upon her lips

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Skat A

Date: 9/20/2013 8:35:00 AM

Joseph, , enjoyed your winning poem. Hugs*SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/19/2013 6:07:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your winning love loss poem..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/15/2013 8:00:00 PM

Congrats. Nice going. Ralph

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/15/2013 6:13:00 AM

i feel its not yr finish work yet Congrats on your win.Morgan

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/15/2013 4:14:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning in the contest, Joseph

Litan Dey

Date: 9/15/2013 3:29:00 AM

A very slow poem i mean if we read it like whispering it will sounds good.congo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/14/2013 6:19:00 PM

Joseph, !!! Thanks for supporting my contest with this amazing poem and imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""The Wind."" OR blog! "Tears in Heaven" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15911&PoetID=18720 --take care Always & Forever <3 Linda

Joseph May
Date: 9/14/2013 8:12:00 PM

Thank you for my placement in your contest Linda

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2012 11:12:00 AM

Thank you for your support of my contest and congratulations on your well deserved win Joseph. Love, Carol

Joseph May
Date: 7/27/2012 2:09:00 PM

thank you Carol...glad I was able to make the grade in your contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2012 5:11:00 PM

Sad love lossed work..((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara

David Williams

Date: 7/25/2012 3:56:00 AM

Joseph super congrats on your win, excellent write...David

Joseph May
Date: 7/25/2012 8:09:00 AM

thanks David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/24/2012 5:54:00 PM

congrats Joseph on a marvelous write and win for the lips theme.. a wonderful creation luv..

Joseph May
Date: 7/24/2012 6:35:00 PM

thank you Linda

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/24/2012 5:22:00 PM

For fun you could try this as a rondeau? which would give even more emphasis to your repeated line ;) Congrad's on your fine write winning! Light & Love

Joseph May
Date: 7/24/2012 6:36:00 PM

thank you Debbie...thought about it too late

Sherese Gooden

Date: 7/24/2012 2:30:00 PM

Did I say congrats on your win, Joe? Forgive me. This is a tender, really beautiful poem. Love it.

Joseph May
Date: 7/24/2012 4:16:00 PM

thank you Sherese

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/22/2012 3:06:00 AM

Hi Joseph, love is a hard concept to take or understand... very good with the sighing image and feel... xox~pd

Joseph May
Date: 7/22/2012 4:53:00 PM

Thank you PD...