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Just a Little Story About a Moment

just a little story about a moment standing in the god’s playground peering into the forgiving night evening drops, sweet water dew fills the warm scented air jasmine vies with lilies and violets for queen of the gardens below a mile or two down the rocky cliffs the village dressed in gold and red. streamers and prayer flags wave gayly at temple dancers waiting for the music and drone of monks to begin their delicate steps. a story of love and jealousy, as old as Everest itself, told every year before planting. a long line of small paper lantern boats flow down the river folded and placed just so on the black glistening water to guide the river goddess to their fields, with her pots of rain for their rice. the candles mimic the stars across an open sky clear as newly polished glass. let me stay a while and watch. I will not be missed as there are many going home tonight. Spirit guides can be so fussy but fox is kind and sits beside me on the wall.

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Date: 10/10/2017 3:08:00 PM
Beautiful
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/16/2017 11:51:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 10/10/2017 1:38:00 PM
...very same fox that ate my geese.. hee hee.very beautifull and descriptive and upbeat
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/16/2017 11:53:00 AM
My fox would never eat any ones geese it prefers Cheese Whizz. Thanks Jannie.
Date: 10/6/2017 2:05:00 PM
I have read a little before about the native Red Indian Spirit Guides -- I need to reacquaint myself methinks! Fascinating read, Patricia. :) john P.s I like the reference to the Fox Spirit...I will check him out. :)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/6/2017 2:23:00 PM
'her' a vixen, Thank you for reading and your interest.
Date: 10/6/2017 12:20:00 PM
"jasmine vies with lilies and violets for queen of the gardens." Good verse. Thanks for this one............peace!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/6/2017 12:26:00 PM
Thank you for reading my story and commenting.
Date: 10/6/2017 10:55:00 AM
The image you paint my dear Patricia is enchanting!!! A sweet write!!! Love, Jack xxx
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/6/2017 11:25:00 AM
I hope to take the reader on a small journey to a place outside of their ken. Thank you for coming to visit and read.
Date: 10/6/2017 4:28:00 AM
I love this poem, Patricia... A spirit guide sitting beside you on the wall. The imagery in your poem is fantastic.
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Darren White
Date: 10/6/2017 11:45:00 AM
With imagery I don't mean that it is fiction :) What i mean by imagery, is that you paint nit before my eyes in wonderful images, as if I can see it myself.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/6/2017 6:27:00 AM
It is not all fiction dear poet. Came to me late last night all together as it is. Sometimes that happens. i am glad you like it. Thank you for your encouragement.
Date: 10/6/2017 4:21:00 AM
Really liked it. Evoked some nice emotions.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/6/2017 6:28:00 AM
Thank you D. You are very kind.

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