Just a Little Story About a Moment

just a little story about a moment

standing in the god’s playground
peering into the forgiving night
evening drops, sweet water dew
fills the warm scented air
jasmine vies with lilies and violets
for queen of the gardens

below a mile or two down the
rocky cliffs the village dressed
in gold and red.  streamers 
and prayer flags wave gayly 
at temple dancers waiting 
for the music and drone of monks
to begin their delicate steps. 
a story of love and jealousy, 
as old as Everest itself, told 
every year before planting.

a long line of small paper 
lantern boats flow down the river
folded and placed just so on the
black glistening water to guide the 
river goddess to their fields, with 
her pots of rain for their rice.  
the candles mimic the stars across 
an open sky clear as newly polished glass.

let me stay a while and watch.  I will not 
be missed as there are many going
home tonight.  Spirit guides can be 
so fussy but fox is kind and sits beside 
 me on the wall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pal Chowdhury Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 3:08 PM
Beautiful
Cresswell Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Thank you so much.
Breedt Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 1:38 PM
...very same fox that ate my geese.. hee hee.very beautifull and descriptive and upbeat
Cresswell Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 11:53 AM
My fox would never eat any ones geese it prefers Cheese Whizz. Thanks Jannie.
Fleming Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 2:05 PM
I have read a little before about the native Red Indian Spirit Guides -- I need to reacquaint myself methinks! Fascinating read, Patricia. :) john P.s I like the reference to the Fox Spirit...I will check him out. :)
Cresswell Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 2:23 PM
'her' a vixen, Thank you for reading and your interest.
Evans Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 12:20 PM
"jasmine vies with lilies and violets for queen of the gardens." Good verse. Thanks for this one............peace!
Cresswell Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 12:26 PM
Thank you for reading my story and commenting.
Ellison Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 10:55 AM
The image you paint my dear Patricia is enchanting!!! A sweet write!!! Love, Jack xxx
Cresswell Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 11:25 AM
I hope to take the reader on a small journey to a place outside of their ken. Thank you for coming to visit and read.
White Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 4:28 AM
I love this poem, Patricia... A spirit guide sitting beside you on the wall. The imagery in your poem is fantastic.
White Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 11:45 AM
With imagery I don't mean that it is fiction :) What i mean by imagery, is that you paint nit before my eyes in wonderful images, as if I can see it myself.
Cresswell Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 6:27 AM
It is not all fiction dear poet. Came to me late last night all together as it is. Sometimes that happens. i am glad you like it. Thank you for your encouragement.
Armishaw Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 4:21 AM
Really liked it. Evoked some nice emotions.
Cresswell Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 6:28 AM
Thank you D. You are very kind.
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