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Just a Kiss In Summertime

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Summertime: that's when all is hot and dry, The sea is calm, and beneath a shade we lie, Then it is time to go for a cool dip. After which a long cold drink we will sip. The ice-cream vendor slowly passes by We called him over and two we buy. I gulp mine down as I watch her tongue, Licking the cream, watching her so young. Can I ever let such beautiful sweetheart Escape my love and from me stay apart? Tentatively I reach out and take her hand My mind vibrating a love song from some band. When she kisses me softly on my lips. It is as if the sun goes in an eclipse. Then I know what love really meant. My heart beats fast and I am content.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/5/2022 12:57:00 AM
Love the last stanza showing what magic an ardent gesture of love does and how content the lovers feel. A lovely poem!
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Date: 9/15/2021 12:06:00 AM
Very good love poem, Victor. Enjoyed the read. God bless you.
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Date: 9/12/2021 3:29:00 AM
Satisfying love, dreamy one, Victor:)
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Date: 9/7/2021 4:16:00 PM
Just beautiful Victor, sweet, nostalgic and romantic. “Hand in hand at the edge ofthe sea, is how summer lovin’ should be.” ~ Hugs, Belle
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Date: 9/7/2021 1:43:00 AM
Just perfect for a summer with your sweetheart. Beautiful write.
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Date: 9/6/2021 9:18:00 AM
Hi Victor, This is very romantic my friend. You write very well. Happy belated birthday. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/5/2021 8:36:00 PM
Nice romantic one, Victor!
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Date: 9/5/2021 2:46:00 PM
Ooh la la sweet, my friend! When she kisses me softly on my lips. It is as if the sun goes in an eclipse.
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Date: 9/5/2021 12:15:00 PM
- A little kiss with the taste of ice cream ... a lovely and sweet poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/5/2021 11:44:00 AM
Ahh!! Passionate work. New love brings out the best in us. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 9/5/2021 11:19:00 AM
Victor, I enjoyed reading this sweet little tale of young love, filled with your usual lovely imagery. Have a happy Sunday. :)
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Date: 9/5/2021 7:49:00 AM
Victor, your poem continues to charm me with the memory of that beautiful kiss. You have a natural gift for writing about love and desire, which is a lovely way to spend your summer vacation. Your image opened the door to passion, and I appreciated your work.
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Date: 9/5/2021 5:35:00 AM
Taste of that kiss lingers and charms your poem, Victor. Enjoyed the scene you painted--leading to romance.
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Date: 9/5/2021 4:57:00 AM
Victor, a sweet love poem!
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Date: 9/5/2021 2:52:00 AM
A lovely summer romance Victor, you have a gifted pen for love and romance. Tom
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Date: 9/5/2021 1:18:00 AM
Aw... So lovely and romantic Victor.... God bless... ~ Ani
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