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Just a Bag of Fries

A nearly full bag of fries in a trash bin is a little tempting to one not having eaten all day! Somewhere is a single mom scrubbing floors so her kids can eat a PB sandwich smeared with a little jelly, or maybe she will leave them with generic macaroni, a Kraft substitute easy for kids to fix alone - but no big juicy red apples because those would cost twice as much as packaged macaroni for several kids. At least cheese in little packets is calcium for bones. Or is it? When it’s the season to be jolly, potatoes are rather cheap and versatile. You can boil, fry, bake or microwave them. You can buy them flaked for cafeteria style mashed potatoes. But there is something special about salted French fries put into red containers bought at McDonald’s although they get tossed out barely eaten with half-drunk cokes in the same way that people throw money out the door almost any time they go out to eat. Eating out! That is such a luxury for someone who is poor. I’m ok; my belly has its fair share of fat. Folks like me can always last till we get home. But tonight while it is cold and dark, I hope someone will find those fries I spy sitting at the top of this garbage heap. I know they’d be a treat for someone truly starving, and they’d appreciate them more than he who was eating them when they were nice and hot. Even better, of course, I hope all those in need can find a way to feed their families and always have a place to lay their head down for the night. For the Garbage Poetry Contest of Anthony Slausen

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Date: 7/28/2015 7:54:00 PM
Creative ideas. Nice snapshot of current culture.
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Date: 7/27/2015 11:22:00 PM
This is one of my favorite pieces from you. So poignant.
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:59:00 AM
Enjoyed very much--a slight event made memorable!
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Date: 7/25/2015 12:15:00 AM
Beautifully done. I love those fries, too. By the way, so do ducks.
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Date: 7/24/2015 9:28:00 PM
There is the backside of the hand in a land of the free- the constant assumption that if "I" can do it [feed myself-take care of myself] you should be able to - but it is not the truth- at times all of us need a helping hand & true humans will give it! You tell them Andie! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 7/23/2015 7:06:00 AM
A hard fact of life for all too many. Andrea, here in Boston they closed several "Second Helping" organizations because of "legal liabilities". Food from restaurants that was picked up and brought to shelters and rehabs is now discarded. It goes into the DUMPSTERS....in little red cardboard boxes.
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Date: 7/23/2015 2:15:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2015 1:01:00 AM
Wonderful winning write Andrea, u hv touched the subject with the power of ur pen dear, Big congrats!
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Date: 7/23/2015 12:22:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your win, I was amazed by all poem. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 7/22/2015 2:45:00 PM
Beverly, my wife, used to work for head start. She went into houses with dirt floors and 7 0r 8 people living in two rooms, one being the kitchen. I do hope those fries were discovered by some hungry one. LOve, daver
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Date: 7/22/2015 11:35:00 AM
this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!
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Date: 7/22/2015 9:07:00 AM
Your words enter my mind resonate there and force me to feel their weight in the pit of my stomach. Emile.
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Date: 7/21/2015 11:54:00 PM
Andie, this is real and needs to be seen by others who tries to waste and don't even value their food.. They should realize how blessed they are when others don't even have any or they struggling much.. ='( love the title!~Olive ELoisa
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Date: 7/21/2015 4:47:00 PM
A beautiful and excellent penned here Andrea, this is what make you you...........A.M.
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Date: 7/21/2015 9:02:00 AM
Hello my poetic Robinna Hoodie ! This was a great Blank Verse, in particular to those who witness the sadities of the destitute and have the luxury of reading sullen thought's as your write(right)here and can't do a damn thing about the many who are entwined in the mire of destitution. Our suffering for the down trodden is intrinsically all too real Andrea for those of us who must pass through the fact of urbanization each day......
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James Peranteau
Date: 7/21/2015 9:10:00 AM
...Of couse those who must suffer the lack are much more affected than those of us who are "fat" with life's subsistences. Thus, those of us who "can"; even for the less of ourselve's, contribute a kind portion to those forgotten, this will make us benifactor's, "Steward's" of these beautiful souls. Jehovah will bless those of us who do such ! Nice write my friend ! Have a wonderful week...much love, james
Date: 7/21/2015 1:23:00 AM
Andrea, I will not waste a single fry. I teach my kids to appreciate what's on the table. Never waste foods. I have a family member, who's kids don't appreciate the food on their table. It angers me to know, this family member has to trash all her food on a weekly schedule. Her kids will not eat it. All they know is McDonalds, KFC and PIZZA. Thanks for the bottom note. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/20/2015 10:05:00 PM
Two years ago, I couldn't afford McDonalds, or hardly any food, my kid came first and I ate the scraps of what she couldn't finish. I know what it is like to be rock bottom, and being there and coming back from it, I appreciate every over salted, over oiled stick french fried stick. The thought of anyone going hungry in this country is a hard bite to swallow, but there is a way with hard work to get out of the dumpsters, I know. hugs
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Date: 7/20/2015 4:37:00 PM
I used to see a few people dumpster diving at Whole Foods every night and on American Ninja Warrior they followed one of the contestants ,that moved on to the next round, dumpster dive. You never know where life will lead you. What seems gross for one person is normal for the next
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Date: 7/20/2015 4:16:00 PM
Oh this is so good, Andrea, and typical you so caring,,,,i agree with everything you say,,but i find today, the kids in general will not eat the simple healthy foods we grew up with,,,,,they perfer being lead by the media, the movies and don't want what their parents grew up with,,,
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:49:00 PM
On the same way both smile and pain run synonymously. Some people enjoy and some people strive to live with that. Rightly said that a sad thing in the land of plenty. A7 i feel. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 7/20/2015 10:06:00 AM
Wow, you've written a powerful, thought provoking free verse.
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Date: 7/20/2015 9:20:00 AM
Andrea, your write is so moving and emotional 7, one time I bought a big Mac for a ragged old man, he would not take it from my hand so I placed it on top of the garbage can and walked away, I looked back and he had taken it. And thanks for honoring my poem song bird in your contest
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Date: 7/20/2015 8:45:00 AM
The sad part is that help is in place in this country right now(don't know how long it will last) for people who are homeless for one reason or another to get help even if only temporary..Here in this state people can apply for temporary assistance for only one month to get food stamps..If a person is mentally ill there is a system in place for them, etc..Even though there is help many do eat from the dumpster..Many make their homes on bridges eaves on interstates where then exit off to a town.S
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/20/2015 8:51:00 AM
yes, there are agencies all over the country that are helping. I think I mostly fear for children whose parents are working, or single mothers barely getting by and they really cut down on a child's nutrition, just serving the kids those cheap macaronis all the time or potatoes, which really are not all that good for you!
Date: 7/20/2015 6:11:00 AM
A touched write from you Andrea it is brilliant as always...........A.M.
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Date: 7/20/2015 1:44:00 AM
G'day Andrea... I enjoyed reading the message in your poem with the thrown away potato chips being the tiny example which really explains a much bigger picture about society - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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