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Just Thoughts

Just Thoughts

The Attic

Looking in the attic through the pages
of an old picture album - I found the 
historic life of me.

Morning Mist

In a morning mist, an illusion came to me,
that you were there, waiting for me.

Angels

As the stars light up the sky at night, the
angels dance in their glowing light.

               
Deep

Deep the ocean. Deep is the sea. Deep
is the love that I have for Thee...

06/10/2014
By Lucilla M. Carrillo

Note: I was just playing with words

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Jerry T Curtis Date: 8/25/2014 7:14:00 PM This to me Is poetry, Lucilla Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 8/25/2014 10:08:00 PM Thank you so much Jerry. Glad you like it.

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 6/21/2014 3:51:00 PM Your words are always creative and set my mind to do the same. Miss you and all the others. Love, Lizzie Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/21/2014 4:03:00 PM Lizzie; It is nice to see you. I am sorry too. I have not been around too much. I have been very sick. I have been in the hospital 4 times this year. I just got out yesterday. I will come back.

Ugwu Cornelius Chidera Date: 6/18/2014 2:24:00 PM i can see you are relaxing your mind by the playing with words of thing happening around your imagination. NICE POEM! Login to Reply

Carl Fraser Date: 6/16/2014 1:01:00 PM This is a great expression of how the mind jumps from one thing to the next and you display it so well with your words Lucilla, blessings Carl Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/16/2014 10:13:00 PM Thank you Carl for your nice comment.

Kelly Deschler Date: 6/12/2014 10:49:00 PM This is a very unique write of beautiful random flowing thoughts.... I have a notebook that I keep my inspirations in, and it looks very much like this.... I enjoyed reading your poem tonight, Lucilla! Nice work! Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/13/2014 2:00:00 AM Thank you Kelly, glad you like them.

Harry Horsman Date: 6/11/2014 11:04:00 AM wow i just love these, you have them as light poetry, oh the feeling they profess, are so powerfull Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/11/2014 1:01:00 PM Thank you Harry. I'm glad that you stopped by.

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/10/2014 7:12:00 PM you fill me up with these vignettes of life and love... lovely, lucy!. huggs and prayers.. how are you? Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/10/2014 7:22:00 PM Thank you Nette; I need some prayers this week.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/10/2014 6:48:00 PM wow, I really enjoyed this set of little poems. With some tweeking, they could become haiku or sijo or something. GREAT job, dear. The last one my favorite. Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/10/2014 7:21:00 PM Thank you Andrea; I'm glad that you like them.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/10/2014 6:47:00 PM Hi, Lucilla, First I had to tell ya, yeah I made up the Sinatra ghost. Always wondered how far the guy was into the mafia though. Can you imagine a mafia ghost? hahaha. now to your poem. Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/10/2014 7:20:00 PM I always knew that he was deep into the Mafia. He was was always telling everybody - I'll put you in the trunk. May he rest in peace

Eileen Manassian Date: 6/10/2014 2:23:00 PM You play beautifully, my dear. Lovely and sweet write. I hope you are keeping well. Love you Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/10/2014 3:05:00 PM Thank you Eileen; I would like to pay something different, but for now that's all I can do. I will visit you soon.

Ken Carroll Date: 6/10/2014 1:59:00 PM Some wonderful introspective reflections here Lucilla! Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/10/2014 3:06:00 PM Thank you Ken for the nice comment.

Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2014 1:51:00 PM Every single poem is stunning in its own right - put together it is simply sensational Lucilla! Hugs as ever Jan xxxx Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/10/2014 3:07:00 PM Thank you Jan. I am glad you like it.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/10/2014 1:23:00 PM - The thoughts and pictures ..... from time that went too quickly ..... melancholy and enjoyable - love it, Lucilla :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/10/2014 1:41:00 PM Thank you Anne Lise for reading my Thoughts.

Tim Smith Date: 6/10/2014 1:20:00 PM Even though they are just thoughts they stand alone and could be the beginning to a masterpiece...Hugs Tim Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/10/2014 1:45:00 PM Thanks Tim. You make me fee good. A master piece hah.

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 6/10/2014 1:12:00 PM You have done what I've always wanted to do...This is great work from a talented artist! Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/10/2014 1:44:00 PM Hi Pace; you just made my day. I shall visit soon.

Frederic Parker Date: 6/10/2014 1:07:00 PM you have captured the wonder of it all perfectly Login to Reply Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/10/2014 1:47:00 PM Thank you Frederic; I am glad that you like it. I will visit later.