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Junkyard Moon

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qijue (7 syllables)

Bygone youth carelessly spent Damaged goods years of torment Guiltless heart cruelly scarred Abandoned in junkyard charred Spent days wasted nights crying Torment focused on dying Scarred and marred deep to the bone Charred wishes on a moonstone Submitted on March 9, 2019 to contest JUEJU-QUIJUE WITH A TWIST sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA - RANKED 1ST

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Anisha Dutta
Date: 4/17/2019 9:29:00 PM
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CONGRATS to win top.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2019 9:39:00 PM
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Thanks, Anisha. Much appreciated.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/17/2019 8:54:00 AM
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CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Line! Janice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2019 7:54:00 PM
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Thanks, Janice. Most appreciated.
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Charles Messina
Date: 4/17/2019 6:27:00 AM
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Line, this is such a dear poem. I love it and it just touched me. Congratulations on your 1st place win with this gem. Very well done...Charlie :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2019 7:34:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Charles, for your most appreciated compliment. Enjoyed being inspired by your contest.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/12/2019 12:54:00 AM
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Great imagery here; good luck in the contest.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2019 8:26:00 AM
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Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 3/10/2019 9:34:00 AM
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WoW! Line, This is a good entry for contest . Your metaphors are goods well. Looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest :-)Alexis
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2019 10:38:00 AM
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Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Alexis.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 3/9/2019 9:30:00 PM
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Masterfully penned, very powerful images in this piece! Great work, Line! ;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/9/2019 10:08:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Rhona. Most appreciated.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/9/2019 6:25:00 PM
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The ending line "charred wishes on a moonstone" ....I am still pondering that one. Wow. Your imagery is stunning my friend.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/9/2019 7:36:00 PM
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Thanks for your visit and compliment, Caren.

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