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qijue (7 syllables)

Bygone youth carelessly spent Damaged goods years of torment Guiltless heart cruelly scarred Abandoned in junkyard charred Spent days wasted nights crying Torment focused on dying Scarred and marred deep to the bone Charred wishes on a moonstone Submitted on March 9, 2019, to contest JUEJU-QUIJUE WITH A TWIST sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 4/17/2019 9:29:00 PM
CONGRATS to win top.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2019 9:39:00 PM
Thanks, Anisha. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/17/2019 8:54:00 AM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Line! Janice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2019 7:54:00 PM
Thanks, Janice. Most appreciated.
Date: 4/17/2019 6:27:00 AM
Line, this is such a dear poem. I love it and it just touched me. Congratulations on your 1st place win with this gem. Very well done...Charlie :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2019 7:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, Charles, for your most appreciated compliment. Enjoyed being inspired by your contest.
Date: 3/12/2019 12:54:00 AM
Great imagery here; good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/12/2019 8:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/10/2019 9:34:00 AM
WoW! Line, This is a good entry for contest . Your metaphors are goods well. Looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest :-)Alexis
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2019 10:38:00 AM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Alexis.
Date: 3/9/2019 9:30:00 PM
Masterfully penned, very powerful images in this piece! Great work, Line! ;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/9/2019 10:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rhona. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/9/2019 6:25:00 PM
The ending line "charred wishes on a moonstone" ....I am still pondering that one. Wow. Your imagery is stunning my friend.
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Date: 3/9/2019 7:36:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and compliment, Caren.