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June Moon, But No Swoon

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*Bing Crosby, 1903-1977, American singer, actor—known for this crooning singing

style (Grammy Hall of Fame for “White Christmas” and others)

I cringe when my man tries to croon each time we two gaze at the moon. Oh, why must he sing? Does he think he’s Bing?* His noise won’t put me in a swoon! June 4, 2022 entered in the "Moon in June" contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Fj Thomas

Date: 6/22/2022 12:19:00 PM

Lolol a wonderful Limerick Janice.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/14/2022 11:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Bing was great and so is this write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/13/2022 9:42:00 AM

Ouch! A little off tune in the moonlight! Congratulations on your win Janice! Blessings for a more tuneful moonlit night!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/13/2022 10:52:00 AM

Thanks a million, Sam. Janice :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2022 11:44:00 PM

Of all the limericks entered, this was my favorite overall (for meter, rhyme, etc) Congrats for your third place in my moon in June contest.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/13/2022 10:51:00 AM

Andrea, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my placement! Janice

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/6/2022 6:49:00 AM

LOL! We can’t all be singers! Where is Elvis!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/7/2022 9:32:00 AM

So true, Kim. THANKS. Janice

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/5/2022 10:43:00 AM

The Wolf Man cometh? Aloha!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/5/2022 11:14:00 AM

He can probably sing better than the guy in the poem. Thanks, Rico. Janice :-)

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/4/2022 8:47:00 PM

Lol! Janice, There's only one Bing! His crooning put a lot of women over the moon. This was so funny that I laughed out loud. Best wishes in the contest. Have a lovely evening and weekend;-) Alexis

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/5/2022 11:09:00 AM

Alexis, THANKS a million! Janice